by bill33
God! Your stories are sooo hot. So earthy. So lusty.
I love it. I love it.
I love how straight the characters are. And how passionate and into the whole... naughtiness, they are. Simple, direct and so good, apparently.
Wonderful, wonderful job!
Oh, just one thing: I think it would be nice if the sex parts were a bit longer, and a bit more graphic but without being vulgar just very.... earthy, as you did here. ;)
Keep going.