All Comments on 'Across That Line'

A very good 4 Star ⭐⭐⭐⭐ tale! Otherwise, due to a few minor errors, closer to a 5... Ashley, suffered from the old adage " Let sleeping dogs lie". She knew not, what beast she had unleashed, until it was too late. Brad let her manipulate him until he got her right where he wanted her to be. Sadly, at the end, she was still trying to manipulate him with the FemiNazi ally.

How pathetic was the husband, why do authors try to make the MC if his male to be the most spineless individual possible? ⭐️

Great story, Great song. He sure loved her to go through all of those machinations. The character evolved wonderfully and he certainly chose a unique way of breaking the "addiction". The story also prompts the modern age old question and that are all miserable women femanistas? sometimes it seems like they have fucked up chromosomes. Anyway again a great effort, very entertaining and much appreciated. 5/5

A damn good and well written story. It was clear she was hooked and nothing and nobody would stop her from getting back into swinging, except her. And eventually she did, with a some shoving and pushing from Brad. Had a good ending too. 5 stars

I'll give it 3/5 but wish I could go back in time and just not read it at all. 50k words just to flip the script. This seems like it should've been a 5 page story at most.

Excellent story full of plot twists. Needs to be read with an open mind and emotional maturity. I feel sorry for those who can't manage that as they miss out on a very clever tale. BardnotBard

Stupid story and ridiculous ending. I remember now why I quit reading this writer. LM

How do we know Ash is truly and forever burned out?

Naw, 5 stars for a great emotional read!

The Games People play....

The fine line between control and safety

To thrill seeking and almost out of control?

Where do you find these so-called men that only have a life threw SEX , the hotel scene would have ended my life with her, and the children crap you have to be kidding? They belong to her and have nothing to do with him, he will allows be the WIMP.!

A classic. Ashley was too much of a bitch at the end though.

I don't see that she had any right to be angry at Brad for giving her what she wanted because he gave her too much.

Clever and well-written. Loved the twists and turns and the reality of how people get defensive when they're in the wrong.

Actually, I almost did what previous maderia1076 did for the same reason..I cannot suffer fools or idiots as your MC appeared to be at the start of your story in the hotel..Being unfamiliar with your writing kept me reading to see where it would go.You had him,promptly without any notice left for her,leave to go home and because of that, I ended up reading your tale. It is a good story,I enjoyed it but it was a bit to long going over the same type of sexual lifestyle events needlessly..It hurt the story some...It is a well written and plausible tale..4 stars JZK..

I apologize; I couldn't get past the first page when they were checking in and she ran off for sex with the o!see couple. The guy finishes the check in and takes the bags to their room.

It grossed me out for him to be such a wuss.

I really enjoyed this. Is there a category for "loving mind games"?

Started decently then went off a cliff into a river that flowed past the sewage plant. Story was TOO long. The angst the MC endured over and over was too long.

Garbage just more humiliation and belittling of any male characters to weak honorless, creeps who have zero self-respect, no valor and protray men as cowards with little to no virtue. The woke stories on this site show nothing but contempt for anything masculine dubbing it "toxic" yet almost all of the actions of the "modern" female's in these same stories fall under the very definition of "TOXIC" funny how the definition of words doesn't have to be true to brand it as an insult (toxic masculinity) - especially after 15 pages of toxic feministic propaganda

Long and winding road.

Reread and regraded from 3/5 to 4/5, it may eventually get to 5/5/. It is quite a good story.

Good start, then the foray into the lifestyle turned it south.

The screaming meemies complain about amateur stories on a free site! It begs the question why none of these geniuses have attempted to do better that this writer's works. Some, who complain about the writers on this site can barely manage a two line comment. Even then, the only things clear from these commenters is that they can neither write a simple sentence nor can they convey a coherent thought. And they dare complain about OP!

A very unrealistic beginning. Here is our Hero, who is his wife’s third husband, and he knows about her past as a swinger. First, why did he not immediately turn around and cancel the weekend? OK, so his wife then protests vociferously that she just wants to watch the passing show of the swingers’ antics at the hotel and he stupidly relents and they proceed anyway. Next, once at the hotel wife meets swingers she knew from before and immediately without so much as a word to her husband jumps right into the sack with them. WTF??? This is not even remotely realistic human behavior. Sorry, just not buying it.

Actually just a thought when you marry a wife your not looking for a slut you fuck a slut you don't marry them.

Written by Dumb and Dumberer if they were creampie aficionados who have an unhealthy obsession with Slut Wives.

Pretty standard gutter trash from this author. At least the writing is consistent from the other stories produced under this writer name. Fifteen pages of wasted computer bytes, author really hates men.

Should have divorced her after her Dallas betrayal...

A well written story about an absolute trainwreck of a marriage. How they made it past Dallas is beyond me. I am usually respectful of a reconciliation but that was surreal and her lack of explanation beyond a haze of excitement was awful. But ok they make it past that point and she reasserts her pledges. Yeah right. Soon she has to get her fixed in forums, web sites about her drug of choice (swinging), and phone calls with Glenna. She is now surrounding herself with the drug paraphernalia prior to using the needle. After discovering that no idea how Brad doesn't file for divorce. Ok say he is a really nice guy, loves Ashley fierce, has heard the "never cheat" dialog with Glenna (imagine if he hadn't heard that), and is worried about her two daughters. Now he tries the porn, the roleplay, the flirting (play with fire). Then comes the engineered soft swap. That is absolutely when he should have filed. Why? Because she is so turned on by it, he isn't and the confession afterwards about she wanted him to screw the other wife lays it all out. In the story he see no way forward but to go along with swinging. But the obvious answer is confess to what he was trying, what he heard on the tape, what he saw on the computer, and say enough is enough and file for divorce. Maybe they go to a counselor, maybe they try a separation, so she can see what she is losing. Instead he opts for what like six months of hardcore swinging to get her to the point she realizes she had better sex and enjoyment when they did the porn and roleplay? Really? And then she is pissed for him manipulating her to save the marriage? Why go through all of that. Stage an intervention, don't try to do the rehab yourself. That is not believable or at all likely to succeed. Again well written but long story, but the premise descended into debasement and debauchery of the husband's principles to make his wife wake up. But now at the end he looks to be in trouble. It is not clear but there is a decent chance their marriage is doomed, or at least forever wounded. Either he will stray or she will get jealous for no reason, or their sex life will crater with each other due to their discomfort. Without counseling I bet the chance of divorce more than doubles. He left his morals and honor at the door and let his wife go back to her addiction. She may come around but what will she do settle for as "appropriate" and still fulfilling? Will she go the other way out of shame and guilt? Or will they flirt and watch pornos? They had something good then went further and crapped over it. And the real problem is that he is forever changes. He knows now how much women desire him not just for his looks but his sexual prowess. "...and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you". I wish this fictional couple well but without a lot more work in their marriage, they are in trouble.

Load of crap.Silly me kept on reading ,thinking it had to get better.

Sorry... when I read where Ashley told Brad about the swinger's club meeting while they were on their way to their hotel I would have turned the car around, went back home, and started divorce proceedings... Ashley knew in advance the hotel was hosting a swinger's convention be fore they left and didn't want Brad to find out till she thought it was too late to turn around... this is pure deceit and disrespect and a sure indication she was into swinging and wanted to experience more... that should have been the end of the story.

I liked the whole series. Your writing kept me reading. I was haunted by a glaring inconsistency from early on. It’s only a five hour drive from Dallas to San Antonio, but Brad never asked for honesty about what happened in the many hours between his leaving Dallas and Ashley’s leaving Dallas. That dishonesty on Ashley’s part bothered me throughout the saga.

Ed

I went from chapter 4 to 15. I was pretty sure, this was going to end up with him cucked, eating her cream pies from her lovers. Not my cup of tea. Let’s look at the facts. She said she went “ searching all the bars, looking for him”. But does not attempt to call him, till he is half way home.

She never explained why. Also, her experience behind the door, is “ circumstantial evidence” . There is no way to prove she didn’t fuck someone. If she can’t prove it, her actions leading up to going in that room, make her guilty. And SHE DID set the whole thing up, which also makes her guilty. No way in hell, he stays with her, taking financial responsibility for her two brats, from other men. Cut your losses. One star. Because longhorn does not like men with balls!

Dumb and dumber deserve each other. BTW, he was dumber; even if at the end he wanted to leave, she had manipulated him into adopting her children. He's on the hook for child support.

What miserable, fucked up couple. Do something stupid, have the other double down on that with something even worse? With a HEA? just... ridiculous.

Great story. I was amazed that Brad could save the marriage by participating in the lifestyle to such an extent that he made Ashley sick of the lifestyle. He did it much like an addict needed to go through this realization that life without drugs was possible and preferable. I know many who used to smoke cigarettes who cannot stand smokers and gag at the smell of cigarette smoke. Ashley was addicted to the lifestyle and Brad was able to break her of her addiction. Now, in the end, will Brad be able to remain faithful to Ashley or will he keep fucking his beautiful next door neighbor’s wife. You see, Ashley is off the drug of wife swapping but Brad still has a taste for fucking other women on the side. This is another risk of a wife talking a husband into partaking in the “lifestyle” and he may not want to give up that choice even when she has. Will she ever find out he is cheating on her? Probably, then Brad will lose her to divorce as Margaret will convince her to pull the trigger on ending the marriage once she discovers that Brad is fucking the next-door neighbor’s wife. Brad is smart enough to figure out how to get Ashley out of the “lifestyle” but he is not smart enough to control himself now that he has had a taste of it. Great story. I loved it and gave it five stars.

I enjoyed this Novella. The Story was great and I kinda hated the end. Not that I'd change a word because it is an incredibly sad love story of a man who gives up his soul to save his wives soul. For me it cut too close to the edge. I naively married a woman 9 years younger and she turned out to be A LOT MORE SEXUALLY EXPERIENCED than me and She hung the horns of a Cuck on me. Lied to me for 14 years. Then told me I was a lousy lay, had a small cock and basically destroyed my self esteem and my life. "My Life" - what a fucking Joke.

This was an awesome story, what is good for the goose, can choke the gander. 5

5 but not sure how to feel about it. Both the husband and wife did wrong, their relationship seems built on manipulating the other. The wife seemed to have an addiction to sex and the husband was willing to spend months screwing women to try to break her habit. If it wasn't for the kids I don't think they would have lasted after the swingers convention. Still a good long story with plenty of enjoyable smut and a happy ending.

Excellent story, didn't go quite where I expected. Interesting how he used sex against her. But sex is like that, it gets old, the more you have sex the less exciting it becomes unless you are a nympho or guy more interested in notches on his gun rather than a true relationship.

Secrets, lies and swinging will destroy a marriage. In real life and this story.

Ash is a manipulative, sex addict and Brad should've had her go to thearpy instead of self-treating her. His course of action could've gone very bad and at the end of the story, Ash still is sex addict. Eventually circumstance and her addiction is going to rear its ugly head and destroy the marriage. That is, unless she gets the thearpy she needs so she can learn how to recgonize and deal with the situiation. Brad never taught her how to do that. All he did was made Ash sick of swinging in the meantime.

This may work for some people but it didn't work for me. I wasn't included in on the extramarital sex just my wife. After figuring it out that my wife was involved with it I was ready for divorce and was ready to spend every dime we had to fight for our children. I came to find out she had already stopped. I forgave her and moved on keeping our family together. But with the understanding if every I thought someone else was trying to cut in on me I would probably end up in prison. Evidently she believes me because we are still together at 45 years. Men don't tolerate any BS!

Good story. Well written. Showing love for the spouse and doing everything you can to break their addiction; and bring them back to reality and a loving family. Would anyone do what Brad did... that is the question for most. A very enjoyable read! Thank-you

1 star - ONCE&DONE - no second chance - to the curb

Don’t fuck sluts, don’t marry sluts, and don’t stay married if she becomes a slut!

A well written and compelling story of a man who loves his wife and children so much that he will do anything to save his marriage. He comes up with a plan and executes it thus saving his wife from her obsession, but little did he know at the time that his plan might engender a new dark obsession in himself. Hopefully, he finds the strength to deal with it.

Enjoyed your story!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Gave up after eight pages of going no where it was the pits

I liked the story, well written, however heartbreaking. Nice turn I thought her wildness would rip them apart. Thinking about, maybe it was your version of “Taming of the Shrew”.

they were married only for 1 year. She lied to him. No trust at all. All she said could be a lie.

Second, she acted like someone in a hypnotic trance and no one thinks about taking her to see a shrink?

Third, he goes from faithful husband to sex maniac swinger? How do you get back from that?

Sorry, no one to like in this story.

A long piece of crap.

At a party my wife drifted away from me after she finished eating quickly. I finished and visited with friends for a while then went to look for her. When I found her she was dancing with a man I didn't really care for. I ran into a buddy and sat with him. While talking I asked him to watch her to see if she had looked at me. He said she couldn't have missed me. I told him what I was going to do. I got up to leave acting like I was leaving the party by waving then waved to another table of friends then another table of friends then walked out went to our car and moved it not to far but it wouldn't been seen as easy from the building. I hurried back to the building joined a group I knew so I could see if she came out. Out she came yes two face was with her. She looked worried and I heard her say OMG I think he left me and it's my fault for dancing with you Dick. I need to get home. Dick said I will take you honey. She said no thanks you have caused enough trouble already. She turned I guessed to find someone to take her home I was right there and as she seen me I asked looking for someone? She jumped to me and hugged me wispered I'm sorry. I said I am glad you remembered what I had said. That was I would not tolerate going to any outings and be left on my own while she had fun. We went in and danced a while then went home. We are still together after 39 years.

Alot of women forget that their men are people they consider themselves and their pleasure and assume the husband is enjoying just because he participated... This shows the other side of that coin .. Amazing work... His work on converts to equal pleasure could have expanded to a story in itself am curious to where it leads

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A good rule in writing is to get all your ideas written out (and that could have been 16 pages) then go back and trim all the redundant crap out, and get it down to something that's a pleasure to read instead of giving your reader a badly paying part-time job.

A good payoff would be a boner-worthy level of stimulation, which is what we expect from erotic stories. This is like a one chapter novel that revisits the same point over and over in a never ending loop.

You have some promise as a writer, but you better figure out how to give the reader some credit for being able to fill in the gaps, and then, for fucks sake: put those gaps in there!

I stopped on page 7. He should have left her after the hotel. She has too many pitfalls. Anyway, who in their right mind would marry a 22yr old that's been married twice?

Sixteen pages when one would have been more than enough, he goes home packs a bag and sees a lawyer. Job done bish bash bosh.

But we’ve got to have all this nonsense about undying love. Someone hold my hair back while I puke. That’s my view on content.

Writing style as always excellent.

I'd love to know how he convinced Phyllis and Nina into what they did, it sounds like a story into itself. I'd definitely read that one.

He should have NEVER married a 22 year old, twice divorced,woman with 2 kids from diffrent husbands!!! She should have been kicked out after the Dallas incident!!! At least he embraced his inner stud to wifes destruction...

... back for a reread ...

Good story.

Awesome song - was just listening to it.

Excellent story about addiction, how it effects everyone and especially close relationships. Very well done. 5 stars.

It appeared that Brad was finally worn down into accepting the 'Lifestyle' his wife obsessed over. She seemed to be manipulating him closer and closer to what she wanted. It was only at the end that it became clear that Brad was doing the manipulating! But then while curing his wife's disease, he finds himself infected! Swinging has a high record of ending marriages in divorce, so why do people go for it, when supposedly happily married?? Brad and Ashley's marriage will remain on shaky ground and will collapse when the right trigger arrives in their lives. A sad prospect but highly likely.Well thought out and nicely developed.

She either didn't or was wasn't going to cuck him in Dallas? This is the first of LHs' stories where I got to a point of pretty much fast forwarding starting on Page 9. I probably would have tried to work things out after blasting her the way he did when she came home. But I will guarandamntee you when I caught on about the email account, surfing the swinging websites and Glenda/Glenna along with all of the other bullshit lies it would be a case of "Run, Forrest, Run", kids or no kids. This woman can't keep a promise to save her kids asses. But not to worry, if this story had a sequel we'd be reading about more Ashley looking to start up again. The only thing that would stop her would be a jealous lover or an unhappy lovers wife taking her down IMHO..

Just to let folks know, Bexar County is not pronounced "Bear", it's pronounced Bey-har". If you haven't been here in a while they're improved and extended the River Walk and are making plans to revamp the Alamo by returning it to as close as possible to the way it was at the time of the battle. Also, if you come you should really take a day and tour the old Spanish Missions. One last thing about SA, Tim Duncan and Manu have retired Tony left to play for the Charlotte Hornets because the Spurs couldn't promise him playing time. Being the classiest organization in pro sports the Spurs threw 3 great retirement parties at the ATT Center when they retired the boys' jerseys, all shown on local tv. I have said this before and will again, Manu Ginobili was the toughest man in professional basket ball, shit he caught a bat with his bare hand during a game, had to get rabies shots, gave his left nut (literally) for the game and never backed down. Except for the shots it's all out there on the net to watch. Hey, sometimes I like to share my adopted home and my thanks also to LH for sharing also even if I didn't like a lot of the story. He's right, its the middle of August, in the low 100's and what is rain? Signed: BTW

This is probably one of my favorite "betrayal" stories on Lit. There is plenty of emotion with the sex and the sense of guilt is a fundamental part of the story. I looked at some of the comments and I just don't quite understand them. Yes, there are parts that don't flow well and inconsistencies but they do not detract from the story and it is the story that makes this great. Perhaps splitting this into 3 or 4 parts would help bring the story elements forward and get better ratings. This is definitely underrated IMHO.

I finished the story, but it was difficult.

At first I thought Brad was just a dumbass that didn't want to be alone. Willing to put up with her cheating ass for the girls. Even though they weren't his.

You kept the story together until they started swinging. Here I was disappointed and disgusted with Brad. How could this guy demean himself so much? I'm reminded of the quote if you stair into the abyss the abyss stairs back.

This is the biggest waste of time on this site. He should have tossed her way back at the hotel all this whining and other shit made me sick. I really tried to give the author a chance but 15 pages of hog wash come on. I had to skip through so much bull no one could have been this stupid.

That being said, I still wonder how he stayed with her after she screwed up oh so badly at the beginning. Ok, I can totally understand how with the kids he stayed. However, had he cut out on her and given her an ultimatum of them or him they would have both lost.

In Judaism there is an old argument that if a woman has been divorced twice then there is a big problem with the woman. Personally I feel that he would have saved himself a great deal of heartache had he not been home when she got there. In order to cure her of her addiction he wound up getting the illness to a degree. Had he not been home it may have shocked her enough to get her to at the least recognize that she had a serious problem.

How to cure a slut:

Out-slut them. Got it.

Warning: May cause side effects!

Thanks for the nice story!

I didn't understand why he was being so nice to her when she was cheating on him in the beginning, though. I thought the appropriate response would be to leave her at the hotel with absolutely nothing. Just to send a message, even if he thought he might forgive her later. She did leave everything, including her husband, behind herself, and being a grown woman, she should be able to take the consequence for that.

WHo the F would stay married after that incident at the swingers hotel? O

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I like several of Longhorn's stories and I like this one too.

I think however that Brad had an annoying habit, especially in the beginning, to keep harping on about points he wanted to make. Ashley certainly needed telling off, but it gets tedious hearing him point something out a dozen times in every discussion they have.

I've read most of your tales and this is the best.

Thank You

Your characters come alive and I love your style of writing. This is the second time that I read it and I liked it every bit as much as the first time. I'm still amazed when readers comment on the morals of your "characters" and how they would handle the "cheaters." Sheesh ! It's still fiction folks. These characters only exist in the authors mind. It's still only entertainment. Maybe it's how well you write that fools some readers into thinking they are real.. Either way, you have incredible writing skills. This is one of my top 3-stories on this site, and I've read thousands. Thank you for sharing what's in your fertile mind. Easily a 5. 😊😊😊😊😊

I can stand by my old comments and new. Perhaps the new comment shows a deeper appreciation for the talent and craft these authors display....even when I hate aspects of the story.

touch with the Eddie and the Cruisers dark side reference.

Doubt these would have been my choices starting with marrying an ex swinger.....BUT.....this was a fascinating what if study into the human condition. Well done sir.

If a man could actually pull this intervention therapy off, yes that WOULD be impressive.

OK, now I've committed to my current thoughts long after I read this the first time. Now I'll go back and see if I commented then to compare.

Yet at the end you allow her to blame her husband for beinfg manipulative.

There's the door cunt. See ya.

Too stulid. Too unrealistic. Too stupid.

And to change tack TWO stupid people who should not be in the lifestyle.

Did I mention this was stupid.

But Ashley should have been history that first romantic get away. And the bruises on his hands should have come from pummeling her.

Ash certainly had friends staying at the hotel; they would take care of her through the weekend and their charity would get her home.

The impact from being sandbagged made him puke after loading the bags. The pain in his gut lessened during the drive back until he was totally numb. His guarding angel saved him from a few accidents, and the cop that pulled him over let him off with a warning about highway hypnosis.

After parking the car in the garage, he stumbled to their (now his?) bedroom and collapsed on the bed just this side of catatonic until late Sunday morning.

After Ash disappeared into to meeting room and Brad couldn't get entrance, he returned to the front desk and handed the clerk the key cards.

"I finally realized exactly what you were trying to tell me about the swinger's convention, and we don't want the room. Please cancel everything, reverse any charges you may have already made to the card, then forget the card number. You can make it look like we found the room unacceptable or something. Get a new credit card from my wife should she use any of the facilities."

Brad debated about leaving Ash's purse at the desk, then took it and the luggage back to the car. He was soon on the road again and thinking about the trade-offs between living in a broken marriage and just permanently separating.

"I swear to you, Brad, I don't remember how I got down that hall and into that room." - Sorry, not buying it. She wasn't drunk or drugged, the SECOND she knew her husband wasn't in the room she HAD to leave. As someone else said, why did it take her to the next day to come home?

I'd of divorced the first time she did the swinging thing right after I got home from the hotel swing party. Let her find a fourth husband making sure he was into swinging/swapping.

Some of you think this story is too long. I’d rather have a long story which covers all the reasons for the story and it’s out come. A story that’s too short is like put salt on your food before tasting.

Quite admirable how this husband was able to cure his wife so effectively of the cancer that was eating away their marriage. Didn't expect the twist and the explanation that followed. Well done. 5*s.

was stupid, still a good story..... more or less

3 starrs

To stay with her is you love the kids that much. She’s not worth it. At all.

This writer has to have a fucking lot of time to write long boring stories.

No marks. Not even worth half a fucking star

You should write a warning first about this putrid story.

If you don't like swingers don't read this one.

And I can't wait to finish the story to write this: first what she did was cheating. No way I would trust her word face value. She was married twice and fucked both relationships and even son no one seems to talking about aking her to a shrink to know what's wrong with her. The wimpy husband rugsweep the whole thing and stay with her.- Then At their "honeymoon"· you have the poor chump apologizing with her for what she did. He was all the right to have trust issues. She was a swinger and he cheated on him before. I don't buy she didn't fuck anyone at that convention. She lied too many times to trust her word.

I'll keep reading (I'm in page 5) but I smell a huge RAAC coming.

This story would have been really short. From the moment she set him up to cuckold him at the hotel I would have been out of her life.

Divorce papers and move on looking for a truly faithful wife. Everything else you wrote after that was just wimpy yada yada. You try hard to make your males look tough but I think at some point it's stronger than you and you cut their balls.

I would write short boring stories.

not have married her in the first place. News flash. If you aren't a swinger, don't marry a swinger. Hotel incident should have been the end of it. Adios.

I disagree with many of the comments below. It becomes very complex when you try and do something like thus as you experience the fun of it as well. Not sure someone could go that far and I don't think I could have, but was it possible? Yes. Was it entertaining absolutely!

It is too high a price to pay to keep the wife in check; there will always be repercussions, post-redemption; if her willingness to taste the strange was that strong it was not going to go away that easy. If she does stray again, she will blame it as a mere affliction and expect the husband to put up with it as if it is a fetish, not necessarily adultery. If husband gets angry, she will make a cheap comeback 'you did it, too, so if you want to do it, you can.'

I don't write these stories. Would have been boring and short.

Turns out there is a swinger's convention at our hotel....Why are you exiting honey.

Because we are going home dear. Or at least I am. If you have a problem with that, feel free to go on your own. Either way I'll be packing my bags as soon as we get home. Have a good life. EOS

Well actually it would have been shorter than that. I never would have married a swinger or ex swinger.

Though I read the whole thing, it was long and painfully boring....But more than that, it was so far out in left field, it almost made me sick! NO GUY WOULD PUT UP WITH THAT SHIT, NOR WOULD HE GO TO THE EXTREME YOU DESCRIBED TO SAVE HIS MARRIAGE!

Real cuck shit!

How to turn the tables 101, but a real chance was taking.

I always think of swingers as just still on the hunt for the one! The few people I know that are in this lifestyle have ended up switching partners. Divorce is the only thing I can see from this choice. I know it working for you...till one of you leaves.

I only got through the first page but a man is not that brain dead. That was pure horse shit.

Soo bad I couldn't finish it and I will now exclude this author for any further reading.

I thought it was actually quite good. Lots of paths I didn't anticipate. Thanks,Tom

I shouldnt have read it. It was a waste of time.

And still no one talked about taking her to a shrink. She is definetly a basket case. She needs a shrink asap. Why writers think that things like that can be solved without doing anything to change them?

I do believe I would of divorced her right after I left the first "Swingers Hotel Convention".

But so many places were full of pure bullshit.

Interesting fantasy and the ending was a nice twist. I was extremely grossed out by his decision to start swinging. I don't know how he turned off his emotions about letting others fuck his wife. Diving into other women could distract but I don't know how he didn't destroy himself emotionally or develop mental problems.

I couldn't go beyond page 3. I am not going to waste my time reading about that mental anguish of a feckless guy.

Okay you did a great job telling this story. Brad is more understanding than I could have ever been. He did get upset at somethings but overall smart. If I could write I'd make my hero match Brad. There must be more stories about just him before Ashley and after. You and the Editor did a great job keeping track of everything and kept me involved. Five stars! There is a fictional Band that said "most amps go to ten ours go to Eleven that extra for more punch" ! This story has that extra Punch.