All Comments on 'Adelle's Girls: Cleo Ch. 04'

I would like to see more of Cleo and Andrew. I feel like there's more to their story. Please think about it. I'm going to cont. the series, Thanks for the great story.

You can't end it there! You mean tease :P

Although - having read all of Cleo's story now, I thought it was brilliant. I loved the dialogue, loved Erica's especially (wisecracking friends are so much fun to write) and Andrew is one of those knee-wobbling archetypes that, done well, would probably have most women on their knees as often as Cleo. I liked that he was almost jaded, realistic; honest. It made him human. Cleo lives out a little fantasy of mine (of many women's, actually!) although you probably already knew that...

Also, this is far more concise than my stuff :P

Congrats :) Redheads FTW!

I agree with the other comments you can't leave it there it feels like there is so much more to their relationship and I'm so happy that they are trying to make it work...hopefully they will be another chapter from Cleo and Andrew....great writing and can't wait to read more from you xoxo

Wonderful story, dialogue and characters! Thanks for the happy ending.

well written; believable dialog and emotions. Thank you!

Wonderful set of stories. Cleo, at least.

Thanks!