All Comments on 'Adonis in the Flesh Ch. 04'

She needs to encounter Jared ...

I felt after 2 1/2 years finally being able to read an update would be good, but it was drawn out and cliched with the ex girlfriend who's going to try and kill her too. Too many stories on this site with almost the same storyline. It's getting old.

This is not My cup of Tea. I Will stop Reading now.

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1 s t a r trek 4 u feeble regurgitating

Continue. My teeth are clenched in fury at the SOB Jared, and that bitch! Hope Gabe catches up to Ellena and helps put all things to rights. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I was going through my favorites list, and imagine my surprise to find that you'd submitted a chapter 4 this year! Yay! It was a great chapter, and I truly hope that you'll continue this story! Oh, and thank you for making it a long chapter! It makes waiting so long a little easier to take! Please keep it up!

OMG! Can't wait for more. Btw, hating Keira already....grrr!!!!!

story, please continue a chapter a month....it's moving in the right direction with the right amount of suspense...please dont let Elle suffer more than she alre ady did...though immediately after telling her story, I was surprised Gabe would allowed himeself to be stopped by Toni - as a doctor, he should know to calm her the moment she ran from them. That he did not, and the she managed to quietly leave her room is a surprised. I would have expected Gabe to be sitting outside her bedroom door, or somewhere where he could wait to hear that she had calmed down...(that would have been the normal reaction for most people)...but it is your story...let's see where it goes...

Continue please