All Comments on 'Adventures of City Girl Ch. 02'

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HallidayTee about 16 years ago

Outstanding Debut

The first two chapters of your writing debut are sensational. I just love the way you draw pictures for the reader, and that the erotic element is made so much more believable, and enjoyable, by the high quality of your storyline. More please!

Northsider about 16 years ago

Great Work!

You have a very engaging writing style. More, please!

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City girl living in London, I discovered Lit for the stories but have got more into chat more recently. I like chat and role play with people that have plenty to say. If you have no profile, and say 'Hi' as an introduction I probably won't reply. If you have chatted with me...

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