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Anonymousalmost 14 years agoGood enough story for swingers and group sex addicts. But that's about all.
llamedos1112almost 14 years agoAuthorAdventures with Patsy
That's what it was meant to be, what were you expecting, sparticus?
Pistolpackinpetealmost 14 years agoDecent writing, could use some proofing....
....but if you are serious about writing give the reader something to cling to. Wrap a story around the sexual encounter, not just a couple lines.
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