All Comments on 'African Girl Maid For English Rose Ch. 02'

by sarahscarlettlondonsmith

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glorialamuseglorialamuseover 13 years ago
Nice Direction

I like the direction the story is headed, besides the brewing storm of deception desire and retribution. Not to mention the reappearance of Chiku's old nemeses Samantha and Scarlett. ooh delicious intrigue is at hand. Can't wait

perl10perl10over 13 years ago
Definately Picking Up

Good turn of events. Loved the play between Chiku and Victoria's boyfriend. A good dose of restraint plays better and is more realistic. Also more interesting.

smallncutesmallncuteabout 13 years ago
Interesting style

Sarah,

An interesting set of stories so far, but whilst I enjoy the stories there is something missing.

For me I think more characteristion is required of all the principle characters and more detail ...

Miranda

veryfaithfullveryfaithfullabout 13 years ago
good story

I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Delightfully intriguing

Sorry I was late in discovering this delightfully intriguing story. Sorry to see it has not been continued or resumed... at least yet. I hope the author either takes it up again or tries her hand at another story.

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