All Comments on 'After All Ch. 02'

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PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 13 years ago
Hokay.....now that I've read them all I can see it's 4:20 and ....

....thank god for that cause I feel a little vertigo comin' on and I need some comfort. I'm spinning trying to keep up with the pace these sexual psychos pound away at. Not sure all the chapters play out as prefaced but I'm sure it will all tie together just as I'm sure these two couldn't find true love even with God leading the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I'm disappointed with the end. Mainly because it seems like to me she used a broken, lonely, desperate man after making him feel wanted again. Other than that it was great!

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