by voltaire_one
Kris,Ken, Kim,kiss. I got lost half way through and gave up, couldn't you have thought of other names
I'm with anonymous below. The passel of K's made for an annoying, extended alliteration, rendering the prose hard to read. Decent enough stroke story but that was irritating. Thank you for your effort.
i agree, the names got too confusing....the sex was good but i gave up with reading it and just skimmed