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by humminbean

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OleguyOleguyover 10 years ago
O.M.G.

Elle is this old fellows unrequited dream.

Fabulous job, as was the precursor to this story.

LilacsAbloomLilacsAbloomover 12 years ago
Breathtaking

I just want to say again how incredible this story is. I think it's the most erotic thing I've ever read and the writing is just superb. So well done!

LilacsAbloomLilacsAbloomalmost 13 years ago
Wow.

Amazing story. I like it as much or more than "Nature Lover". Love the details (especially the "guy details") and the sweet affection between the two. Great work! Thanks for sharing.

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERover 14 years ago
very nice

very nice thats the way it should be done hope there is more to this story coming

Servo42Servo42over 14 years ago
Smoth as Silk

A great continuation of the story. I hope there is more to come from this story line. A great read.

Cheers

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Been busy lately, but will try to post some new ones. Thanks again for your constructive comments! ------------------------------------ I've written a fair bit of non-fiction before, but these are my first tries at fiction. So far, I'm having a blast with it! Thanks t...