by javmor79
Typically when you read a javmor79 story, you expect a heaping dose of emotional pain, agonizing decisions, betrayal and guilt. This story goes in a different direction, albeit with its own moral dilemma at the core. Innovative and personal, it tiptoes that fine line of internet celebrity sex voyeurism akin to Only Fans and gives a glimpse of how the models get where they are, with a sinister hint of Skynet hovering menacingly in the background. Loved it.
Honestly, i was 'meh' about this. The blurb & most of the first page didn't really grab me. But then it got interesting, and i got hooked. You've got an interesting premise, with limitless posibilities for plot twists. I hope that we'll see more of Ana & Oscar in the future; I'd love to see where you might take this!
As others have said I'd be interested to see this continue further. Good job, thanks for posting
Not normally a genre I read but this was a fantastic story. I sincerely hope you intend to continue!
Oscar hints at severe consequences if Anna reveals anything about the Vixen service. Given this obsession with secrecy, I found myself wondering how the Vixen service is marketed to viewers. It doesn’t seem like the sort of service one advertises on billboards.
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Then it occurred to me that this story IS that marketing device, with Oscar writing under the pseudonym of javmor79. OK, Oscar, you’ve made the sale. I assume that you know who I am behind my username, have signed me up for a Vixen Life Elite Grande El Mucho package, and have already debited my credit card.
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Just let me know when I can read (or view) the next adventure of you and Anna...
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5*
Well definitely a twist a with the end, created something more to the story! Que the music from the x-files. Hopefully more will be coming! Very interesting and entertaining!!!
Great story I hope there's more to come. Today I learned Oscar was an AI. Also today I learned the irs is also using AI against us. Five stars, and thank you for it.
Jaymor79 has great talent as a storyteller, but this story is one more example of NOT FINISHING THE GODDAMMED STORY!!!! Hana is one more example.
Readers have invested their time to read these stories, and this writer has a bad habit of letting them hang without a conclusion. A few weeks between chapters? Sure. A month or two? Well, okay. But this story was published last August and now it is February. And not the only example of leaving the reader hanging.
Sad that such a good author has so little respect for his readers. If the writer had a personal tragedy that stopped them from continuing, I apologize.
dawg997 is right. I'd add The Weekend to the list and probably some other story that I can't recall now, Yeah, your writing is good but it takes more than just put two or three fancy words together to make a good story. You are a good writer, but you are not a good storyteller and you have no respect for your readers.