All Comments on 'Aiko and the Aliens'

by scorpionicus45

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Arousing but Short

A very arousing story, but feels awfully short. Seems like it could be developed more.

barepussloverbarepussloveralmost 15 years ago
Great Start!!

Love the story line! Are there additional chapters planned for this one? :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
dry as dust

this reads like an outline for a story rather than the story itself.

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