All Comments on 'Aiko and the Aliens'

by scorpionicus45

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
dry as dust

this reads like an outline for a story rather than the story itself.

barepussloverbarepussloveralmost 15 years ago
Great Start!!

Love the story line! Are there additional chapters planned for this one? :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Arousing but Short

A very arousing story, but feels awfully short. Seems like it could be developed more.

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