All Comments on 'Aislinn and Cullen - The Honeymoon'

This is good. It has a different..."flavour" than the original series. I can't quite put my finger on it; it's the difference between a young wine and a mature one.

I wonder though... are you planning on becoming the next mistress of the 'cliff-hanger'?

Kudos

That ending wasnt fair...especially knowing u r working on your thesis so prolly your next posts wont be too soon. It's always a pleasure reading your stories :)

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!!!!!! damn now i'm not gonna be able to think straight coz you've got me pining away for your next post! thats cruel secret. please write soon. lol. all the best for your thesis btw..i'm also writing mine so i think i can relate.. ;p take care!

wow, incredible. And you call me mean and a tease...lol.

Awesome but...you gone and teased me :(

Just when it got intresting (well after all the other intresting stuff) there is this huge cliffhanger. Why do both you and DK do this to me.... *whimper*

I cant wait for the next installment and am SOOO happy you decided to make a second story & these small bits.

You're back, or still here or anyways I'm glad!

I'm even willing to overlook the cliffhanger...

It's not crazy that you are creeping up the list of favorites. Your stories are amazingly good, even this "rough draft." Wow, wow, wow!<br><br>

Okay, I'll try to break it down - lol. Loved hearing about the remote cabin and the cave where Cullen's grandparents originally lived. It was so cool that they returned there and he etched Aislinn's name into the family tree. The play in the woods, where she stalked him and they played tag was also wonderful. It was playful and showed a side to their relationship that helps explain why they are such a perfect fit together.<br><br>

The build up and transition of Cullen and Aislinn both perceiving her strength and ability to be his equal was beautifully handled in this story. She is a druid and a powerful one at that, so it makes sense that both of them must be on the same page that she, while willingly submitting to him at times, is his equal partner. Her marking him was the cherry on the sundae.<br><br>

But you are scaring me with her vision at the end, of a terrible feeling of loss. On the other hand, I'm thrilled to see you have two further stories already in your mind to be written. <br><br>

Thank you (and your muse) for this wonderful story.

You dont even know how much Im glad you are back .... : )) I love youuu

I am glad that your going to continue with some of the same characters you are an amazing writer..can't wait for more..

Oohh i have loved this chapter. Especially the hot scenes and foreplays :) Now i cant wait till the next chapters come out... You're so damn amazing at this!!

I just can't get enough of these two - or the pack or Druids....please, please, keep 'em coming!

this has got to be one of the best stories i've ever read, here and in books. i really hope you go more in depth with both the druids and other members of the pack. can't wait to read what else you've got.

Good job. I love reading your stories. Look forward to the next installment.

This is one of the best set of stories I have read. I just love it, keep it up

You never cease to amaze. The way that you opened Cullen's character up even more than before and left several roads open for exploration in the future was amazing. Not to mention you've once again picked up the interest level to where everyone wants to know what's going on and what's next. Don't quit!

I continue to check your stuff daily an i am still having dreams of the people in the stories that is always a tale tell sign that i truely love a story please continue I am very much looking forward to the litter as well as more between these two as well as the rest of the pack / clan.

Oh, this is the best yet! I can't wait for the next, please don't be too long in posting it. I've been looking for follow ups under LOTP and found this one by your name link after happening upon Cadifor and Makeda.

Thank you for this amazing story.

Loved the series can't wait for more. I hope that you continue to write about these two = the pack and the druids. LOVED IT

I have read the entire series - and am not ready for it to end!

I have been totally entranced with this story in a way that I usually only am with certain author's books. But you left it at a heck of a cliff hanger - and I'm sure I'm not the only one that wants to know what happens!!!!

I spent the entire day reading your stories...and now I need more!

Your story is good as well as erotic, although litter is spelled with 2 l's, secretme!

I would really like to find out where Jenna went, and also a story of Aislinn giving birth - I'm looking forward to finding out what the twin pup/kitties will look like in their animal forms! Thank you for a wonderful story (I read Leader of The Pack too. It's great.)

I've really enjoyed reading about these two characters. I hope that you post the two sequels soon; I'm dying to see what happens next.

I love your leader of the pack stories! I know that I'll probably go mad if you don't make these next ones soon! Wittens! Heh, I wonder how the wolves back at the den will react to Aislinn being preggers...! Please hurry!

You do know that you're killing me out here, right?!?! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the rest!!! Your writing is very good and i am totally addicted! Evne tho you left me in suspense i still love you! =P Keep writing!

wow you blow my mind with the way you wright i cant wate for what comes next its like im at the caben as one of hem andi just love it iv card and got so excited at the same time love it keep it coming

YOUR STORY KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!! THIS IS ACTUALLY A "NOVEL". YOU SHOULD HAVE THIS PUBLISHED IN PRINT! ACTUALLY YOUR STORY IS BETTER THAN SOME OF THE BOOKS THAT I'VE BOUGHT... THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS WITH US AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPCOMING STORIES...

I totally love this storiee

but it been a whole year

when r u gonna write the next stories??

I've read all the series, and I absolutely love this chapter! I loved that you included part of Cullen's past, I would like to get to know the characters more! Thanks for the story, I enjoyed it!

It has been a very long time since I've read anything that grabbed my attention so thoroughly that I couldn't read fast enough to satisfy my curiosity as to where the story was going to go. (Robert Jordan's "Wheel of Time" series was the last thing that did it...)

I'm definitely looking forward to a continuation...

Came across your stories and ended up having to read all of them!!! Brilliant writing, and a truly coherent theme through the stories, great development of Aislinn's character.

Keep going!!

I have to tell you I stumbled across your stories and I haven't been able to stop reading them!!! Took me 2 days to read all of Leader of the Pack!!! However I have to ask if you ever submitted any of the other stand al9one stories like the honeymoon? I saw you posted this one in 2008 and haven't seen anything about the druid or the other one. Thank you so much for sharing your fantastic ability to bring a story to life!!!

Will have to re-read Leader of the Pack. but is certainly no hardship :) PJ xx

Very hot!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next! You haven't dissapointed me yet! Hope the next two chaptas are up super soon! Dying to find out what happens next!!!! Did I already say that? Oh well it's true!!!!

once again awesome, but what happen to the rest of Aislinn and Cullen, i cant wait .... well keep up the good work.

That was awesome!

There were so many gems in that. The family tree of course was beautiful as was the whole idea of him sharing this place that no one knew about with her. The fact that she marked him finally and the way you did it was so great with him submitting to her. It is so damn sweet how happy he is about the babies! Of course the darn cliffhanger is gonna kill us...is it Jenna out there or something totally different? I'm tired...but I thought so much of it was really spectacular. I really enjoyed it and am so psyched about your continuing the story. It's 4 freakin' a.m. Once again. I slept only a bit last night too. Your killin' me...or my obsession with your writing is! ;) thanks and keep writing! I was so lucky to hit it when the first story was done. It'd be hell to have to wait for each chapter...ahhh!

his sister as well?

why did you have to go and stop writing these, they are awesome

Please make more Of these stories I love the way the stories are a mix of mystery and romance and fantasy and please make one of lesbian werewolves and one of lesbian vampires again awesome!!!!!

I'm watching for *Aislinn* The Druids and Her Powers and *Cullen and Aislinn* The Birth. Are you going to write these stories yet?

Maybe I'm missing them. I've read your stories a while ago and am now just rereading Leader of the Pack series & The Honeymoon.

I haven't gotten to Leaders of the Pack-4 part series or Cadifor & Makeda - on the Hunt. I know I've also read these but need to refresh my memory of them.

this story just leaves us hanging a bit.

I think you should show them have sex in missionary. It would be more intimate and infinitely romantic. So far (I actually haven't finished reading Leader of the Pack, but I'm at chapter 20) I haven't seem them do that. I know they're wolves and all, but they're part human, too. Just a thought..

I really like this...

waiting for the sequels... when are they coming?

(ellie.candygirl@hotmail.com)

I am glad I found this after reading Leaders of the Pack!!!!!! Love your stories.....keep it up!!!

I noticed its been awhile since you've done anything with the side stories you mentioned.. hope too see them soon! btw have you ever thought of a co-author story with WHITESABERTOOTH?? you two have similar characters(druids and ancients +werewolves/lycanthropy) i think compilation of your two author minds would be cool to read, or even an meeting of all the werewolves in the two stories. . .just and idea. .

my email is anniejones10302011@hotmail.com keep writing and cant wait til published i will be buying!

Just keeps getting better. Can't wait for more.

You are obviously running your work through a spelling checker. You must realise that this will not pick up on perfectly spelled but wrong words. The worst one was "liter" for a litter of cubs. A liter is a unit of volume! There are many other similar howlers (sic) in your writing, so PLEASE get a good proofreader.

Brilliant stories, please keep going. I have just read the entire "Leader of the Pack" series in the last 24 hours as it was so good. Congratulations.

Mike

Wow I really have to say that minus the errors I love what you have written so far with these two characters and the subcharacters in the Leader of The Pack story. I have read numerous books like this and honestly I feel your work is comparable to Sherrilyn Kenyon, Christine Feehan and many other fabulous authors in this genre...keep up the awesome stories, I look forward to reading them kept me looking forward to the next page or chapter!

i have read the series of "Leader of the Pack", and have become a huge fan. This is the second installment I have read.. you have a wonderful imagination and talent! Once again, another one in my favorite story list..lol cant wait to see what else you come up with!!

I have an affinity for Werewolves and Werecats, you bring these creatures to beautiful life with such ease. I've read what other readers like myself have had to say about your obvious skill as a writer. Couldn't agree more with my fellow fans if I had tried to, will definitely be looking forward to reading what's next. A sincere fan...Wolfheart.

I am so glad you kept writting I am so wanting to buy the printed copy. I just cant get enough of this story bring it I have been telling my friends about it and getting the too log on. Keep on bring it love love this....

I love most chapters of your stories in the Leader of the Pack, HOWEVER, why even bother to write a standalone chapter on the Honeymoon the story isn't complete? How can this be called standalone (by itself?) ??? It's annoying. Perhaps you should have just added it to Chapter 27 so Cul and Ains go on their honeymoon and continue the story from there...

"Leader of the pack" was a good story. And you should have stopped there. When you try to prolong something after The End, there's always a big possibility to screw things up. That's why I never read second books, unless they're rated better than first ones. Too much disappointments.

i love love love aislinn and Cullen....please keep writing. I came across this by chance and now I cant even stop reading.

What? Where? When?

And still no end to this cliff hanger

I love these stories! Keep them coming!