by juliancoreto
I love this story, best on literotica...just dont keep us waiting so damn long.
I Agree This Is One Of The Best On Here Though I Still Think You Should Rewrite It As A Book Eventually You Might Have To Tone Down The Sex But You Have A Great Plot Going Here Can't Believe This Page Took Almost A Month Hopefully The Next Will Be Quicker Again.
Excellent, I do not mind waiting for a good story! Your's is without a doubt one of the best!
Thank you,
Joel
But I think that kate and alan would actually make a great couple,but thats just me!
to be honest i like the story parts more than the sex, because the stuff is really cool , actually i liked the part where he was at atlantic city most. great story anyway
its shaping up where Kate is the likely choice for allan maybe she can get her own seed and his of course lol so to speak. great story looking forward to more. thank you