All Comments on 'Alan Ch. 19'

by juliancoreto

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Awesome

I love this story, best on literotica...just dont keep us waiting so damn long.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
About Time

I Agree This Is One Of The Best On Here Though I Still Think You Should Rewrite It As A Book Eventually You Might Have To Tone Down The Sex But You Have A Great Plot Going Here Can't Believe This Page Took Almost A Month Hopefully The Next Will Be Quicker Again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
WELL WORTH THE WAIT!!!!

Excellent, I do not mind waiting for a good story! Your's is without a doubt one of the best!

Thank you,

Joel

reader018reader018over 12 years ago
Its probily jusy me...

But I think that kate and alan would actually make a great couple,but thats just me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

to be honest i like the story parts more than the sex, because the stuff is really cool , actually i liked the part where he was at atlantic city most. great story anyway

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great story

its shaping up where Kate is the likely choice for allan maybe she can get her own seed and his of course lol so to speak. great story looking forward to more. thank you

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