All Comments on 'Alan Ch. 28'

I'm happy the story is OVER. The ending was ludicrous, and thoroughly without merit.

Adios.

Easy to tell, you put a lot of work into this story.

Thanks for the good read.

Dude, you ain't done.

Are you?

I've been asking for more now two years and I've never heard back from the author. Why? I want more, like the ending or something. Even more written by the author. This is a great series. If I could, I'd get into a hall of fame.

When is the next ch. 29 coming out

I suppose it's safe to say that after almost 10 years this one isn't getting finished. Had it ended without the final comment from Michiko I think it would have been fine but knowing there was more to come is a bummer. Would have loved to see where the story was headed next.

Or has something happened to You???

I have really enjoyed this story, even though there are a lot of grammatical mistakes.

Hi, i only want to tell you , that on my mind your story is really fantastic , and i really hope that you finish the story.

Well, it's been almost ten years since Chapter 28 came out and the promised Chapter 29 has not appeared.

I'm truly disappointed. I've really enjoyed this story and would love to read more of it from this author.

can u please do ch. 19 please we are dying for it

Hmmmm guess the author died or if not must have his head up his ass

Excellent writing, a few minor misspellings, superb story line, really wish you would continue, I'm hooked

In the immortal words of kanye west

"Well I guess we'll never know."

Another story left unfinished

Where is chapter 29?

It would really be a shame not to continue it!!!

Very nice engaging and well written.

Thanks for sharing.

One of the best stories I've read on this site. I've a feeling it will continue. Alan's former Editor in Chief needs to re-ignited. With his network of contacts ever expanding, the number of situations he could encounter, and call them up for assistance, is endless. Iranian/Iraqi woman are some of the most beautiful in the world, and that hasn't yet been explored, nor their history. Keep up the great work.

I've now read this twice and enjoyed it both times. When are you going to finish it?

This is also the the second time I've read this through.

I am disappointed that chapter 23 is missing and that it stopped at 28.

I would love to read more of Alan's adventures.

i have now read this twice , really enjoyed it both times ! i know it's 13 years but i think that a lot fans of this story would love the continuation or an update on where they are, starting with a flashback to what Michiko was going to tell Alan . thank you for the great story !

Please finish what you started. This has been an excellent story and needs a proper conclusion.

FYI:

Chapter 23 can be found by looking up the author on the internet.

Loved the story. Good read but what's next? Going to read the rest of the story

Would have liked to read chapters 8 & 23

Hopefully you will be posting chapter 29 soon

More please. Too good to stop now

I wonder what happened to the author? Why didnt he finish such a great story?

??? :(

This called abandonment it appears. More More More Encore@ juliancoreto!!!

Personally, I would have no idea just how many of your readers, including myself, are quietly waiting for the epilogue of this story to be posted, however... I'll be frank, HUNDREDS IF NOT THOUSANDS are trying to remain calm during your hiatus. So, with that being said, would you mind finishing this story, without leaving it with a cliffhanger this time? Please?

15 years and no next chapter. Can we safely assume Julian Coreto is dead?

Could an astonished, terrified and aghast proofreader be the culprit?

I warn myself every time to check to make sure the story is complete. Yet, for some reason I never do it and then get pissed off when I find out the story has been abandoned. Oh well. On to the next one.

Really left us hanging...

Would of Loved to of read the futher adventures and see If they finally find and meet the Other Seed/Ring bearers. And If they all get along.

So many loose ends to tie up. This has been one of my favorite stories and I was around while it was being updated regularly. Still wish for a conclusion

So many good stories especially in mind control seem to just die off.

What a terrific story. Sure, it got derailed, but kudos to the author.

It sucked... Sadly, Mr. Coreto ran out of Talent and left everyone hanging ! 2 Stars for his, apparent failure .

We need an author to come in and try to finish this story.

Love the story. Wish you would have continued and completed it.

Well I suppose it had gone on long enough. Yeah, there were a few loose ends and many possible things that could have been explored further, but the main threat was concluded, the stage was set for Alan and Kate's future, and everything else in between was just distracting fucks or orgies. It was a good story overall though.

i enjoyed the story so much i started skipping the sex parts to get to the storyline, wish it had been continued and completed

Perhaps literotica has a way of marking story series as incomplete. This is worse than coitus interruptus.

Read the whole thing only to discover it's incomplete. Damnit!!!

I guess I don't have to expect this one to ever get finished.