All Comments on 'Alan Ch. 28'

I guess I don't have to expect this one to ever get finished.

Read the whole thing only to discover it's incomplete. Damnit!!!

Perhaps literotica has a way of marking story series as incomplete. This is worse than coitus interruptus.

i enjoyed the story so much i started skipping the sex parts to get to the storyline, wish it had been continued and completed

Well I suppose it had gone on long enough. Yeah, there were a few loose ends and many possible things that could have been explored further, but the main threat was concluded, the stage was set for Alan and Kate's future, and everything else in between was just distracting fucks or orgies. It was a good story overall though.

Love the story. Wish you would have continued and completed it.

We need an author to come in and try to finish this story.

It sucked... Sadly, Mr. Coreto ran out of Talent and left everyone hanging ! 2 Stars for his, apparent failure .

What a terrific story. Sure, it got derailed, but kudos to the author.

So many good stories especially in mind control seem to just die off.

So many loose ends to tie up. This has been one of my favorite stories and I was around while it was being updated regularly. Still wish for a conclusion

Would of Loved to of read the futher adventures and see If they finally find and meet the Other Seed/Ring bearers. And If they all get along.

Really left us hanging...

I warn myself every time to check to make sure the story is complete. Yet, for some reason I never do it and then get pissed off when I find out the story has been abandoned. Oh well. On to the next one.

15 years and no next chapter. Can we safely assume Julian Coreto is dead?

Could an astonished, terrified and aghast proofreader be the culprit?

Personally, I would have no idea just how many of your readers, including myself, are quietly waiting for the epilogue of this story to be posted, however... I'll be frank, HUNDREDS IF NOT THOUSANDS are trying to remain calm during your hiatus. So, with that being said, would you mind finishing this story, without leaving it with a cliffhanger this time? Please?

This called abandonment it appears. More More More Encore@ juliancoreto!!!

??? :(

I wonder what happened to the author? Why didnt he finish such a great story?

More please. Too good to stop now

Hopefully you will be posting chapter 29 soon

Would have liked to read chapters 8 & 23

Loved the story. Good read but what's next? Going to read the rest of the story

FYI:

Chapter 23 can be found by looking up the author on the internet.

Please finish what you started. This has been an excellent story and needs a proper conclusion.

i have now read this twice , really enjoyed it both times ! i know it's 13 years but i think that a lot fans of this story would love the continuation or an update on where they are, starting with a flashback to what Michiko was going to tell Alan . thank you for the great story !

This is also the the second time I've read this through.

I am disappointed that chapter 23 is missing and that it stopped at 28.

I would love to read more of Alan's adventures.

I've now read this twice and enjoyed it both times. When are you going to finish it?

One of the best stories I've read on this site. I've a feeling it will continue. Alan's former Editor in Chief needs to re-ignited. With his network of contacts ever expanding, the number of situations he could encounter, and call them up for assistance, is endless. Iranian/Iraqi woman are some of the most beautiful in the world, and that hasn't yet been explored, nor their history. Keep up the great work.

Very nice engaging and well written.

Thanks for sharing.

It would really be a shame not to continue it!!!

Where is chapter 29?

Another story left unfinished

In the immortal words of kanye west

"Well I guess we'll never know."

Excellent writing, a few minor misspellings, superb story line, really wish you would continue, I'm hooked

Hmmmm guess the author died or if not must have his head up his ass

can u please do ch. 19 please we are dying for it

Well, it's been almost ten years since Chapter 28 came out and the promised Chapter 29 has not appeared.

I'm truly disappointed. I've really enjoyed this story and would love to read more of it from this author.

Hi, i only want to tell you , that on my mind your story is really fantastic , and i really hope that you finish the story.

Or has something happened to You???

I have really enjoyed this story, even though there are a lot of grammatical mistakes.

I suppose it's safe to say that after almost 10 years this one isn't getting finished. Had it ended without the final comment from Michiko I think it would have been fine but knowing there was more to come is a bummer. Would have loved to see where the story was headed next.

When is the next ch. 29 coming out

I've been asking for more now two years and I've never heard back from the author. Why? I want more, like the ending or something. Even more written by the author. This is a great series. If I could, I'd get into a hall of fame.

Dude, you ain't done.

Are you?

Easy to tell, you put a lot of work into this story.

Thanks for the good read.

I'm happy the story is OVER. The ending was ludicrous, and thoroughly without merit.

Adios.

its a shame that a great writer left Literotica Hoping they went into professional writing and did not give up on it, would love to see more of your work either new or continuing this story line if you have continued please submit here or where we can find more.

i am truly delighted to have read this story. please continue and finish the story

As per the title I went looking a few years back after reading this story for the first time, and found a final chapter. I cant be 100% sure that it was written by JC, but it was under his name on a site, and seemed to be written by the same hand as the rest of the series.

It doesn't take place chronologically after this chapter, as far as I remember it being explained, the author had simply gotten busy with life and did most of the writing for this story on the bus or train or something, and no longer had that time in his life. He stated that after being pursued to continue the story he wrote a final chapter that happens years after the initial story.

It wasn't a story continuation, just more of an update of how the main characters lives turned out, and with Allen finally telling Kate about his power set and everything. More of a story review, update, and closing so that the tale would have on official ending.

I encourage anyone who has read this series to head out into the wild blue yonder of ye ole internet and start doing a few searches for Alan Ch 29 juliancoreto. You may eventually come across it. I honestly don't remember where I found it, or what search engine or sights I was digging through, or if its even still out there anywhere. Either way for anyone whose re-read the story or just finished it and now looking at said comments. I urge you to follow the above if you really wanna see the ending... or well at the least what I think is ment to be the ending from the author.

PLEASE FINISH THE STORY!!

This has been a real joy to read...........That being said I am with every other comment I have read. I wish you could continue it juliancoreto. But thank you for taking the time to share what you have!

I LOVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE CONTINIU!

Very good read, and definitely one of the best series I have read so far. Please continue the story. It has been almost 7 years since Michiko promised to have that conversation with Alan....don't you think he has waited long enough?

PLEASE Finish this story. :)

There's no sadder thing to me as a reader, than to read a wonderful story as this one and come to the end just to find it unfinished. Since it's been over six years seems we will only be able to wonder what happen to Allan and Kate.

Can't wait for more!

Where is the next chapter? It has been a long time and I was so wanting to find out what Michiko had to tell Alan and also wanted to see how Kate reacted when she found out about his powers via the "seed". I am also curious as to whether any children from their marriage would possibly somehow inherit any powers of the seed genetically? I know it has been over 6 years but it isn't unheard of for stories to have that much time between chapters!

Great story please continue.

this was a pretty awsome series. can't wait for the next chapter and dose he tell kate of his powers?

Wonderful story that kept my attention all the way. Will you be writing "Occidents Will Happen"? Looking forward to reading your stories again. Pete

PLEASE continue! This is a work of art. It's a shame to let it go now.

I kept thinking I had to go to bed, had to get things done.. but couldn't. I just kept coming back for more.

Thank you for a great read and great sex!

I to enjoyed the story... It truly is a shame but six years has passed.

I would entreat you to finish. Please consider it.

I really enjoy it would like to read the ending I have read it twice so far

This is one of the best stories i have read, ever. I could easily compare this with works like The Hunger Games, or Harry Potter, and others like it. In the end i didn't even care about the sex, i just wanted to read about what came next in the story. I really hope that there is, or will be more.

yea im guilty should be working and im reading your story damn need to run to work now..

great story :)

pity there isn't any more :(

Great Story, I couldnt stop reading it.

All I can do is repeat what others have said. This is one of the best stories in Literotica. I really do hope that one day you will continue the story. I have you marked as a Favorite and check back frequently with the hope that you have returned.

I really hope to see more of this intriguing story.

Is there going to be a next chapter? I was hoping Alan and Katie would marry or at least get engaged for real.

I really wish he will revive. I loved reading all the chapters. Sad to think he won't write again.

3rd June 2006 I wunder wat appened - great pity that such talent is being or has been wasted.

I really liked the story but i don't think he'll be posting again. Check the dates he posted these stories. Been a long time.

I just finished all 28 chapters and enjoyed the story immensely. I see you promised another chapter but have not yet posted anything. Please say you will be continuing this story!!

Nice job. I can't believe I read the whole thing. Intertwined story lines, character development, good and evil, and really great sex.

I'm hoping that Chapter 29 "Occidents will happen" is on the way. Please. For Michiko's sake.

one of my favorite stories. I tbink we would all like to see more chapters. If not for your fans then continue for the characters. They aren't complete. wouldn't you like to complete them? We would like to see thestory completed. Thanks.

Can we see some more of this please? Thanks

The Best Story i have ever Red here!!!

thanks for a great 28 chapter story! I really hope you continue this story!

just started this series and fucking love it. I really hope you return to continue/finish it. but still one of the best I've read on any site, if not the best. you're one of very few talented authors who can successfully write a series. happy holidays, your good ol friend anonymous

i really loved your story ,

at first i thought it was going to be a teen mind control fuck story,

but it turn out to be a fantastic soul gripping story,

please you can`t end it there , what about michiko`s meeting with alan.

there is so much more that alan , jack ,michiko ,kate can do.

please please please more story .

yours thankfully tony

I really enjoyed your story. It was both extremely erotic and very mentally stimulating as well. I was riveted to the story, unable to to quit reading until I finished. I love the fact that it was plot driven and not just about fucking. I can't wait until your next installment.

Started reading this thinking it would be a pretty standard erotic teen mind control story and it really turned into a satisfying story with an interesting plot line, I'm not even all that disappointed that it obviously ended before the author intended, because the major plot line did get tied up in a satisfactory manner.

This whole saga is brilliant and to see it stop is such a shame. What's worse is that you aren't even around to see this, let alone respond.

So I'm writing this in the hope that you come on one day and see this and continue your epic saga.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. Your finishing the story lines would be greatly appreciated. Many thanks for your talented efforts.

Great Story From Begin to end... Just don't end it here. Thanks

I just read through the entire storyline, and I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter! I cannot wait for your next chapter!

its been 4 years since i first read this story and its just as captivating now as it was the first time. i wish that where ever you are in this world that your passion for this story would be reignited and we could finally continue this journey with alan

Are you going to finish this story? We are waiting for you to continue. This is very well written and very enjoyable

just finished reading the whole thing....

all i can say is...

this is the first thing i have seriously read that has something to do with porn...

it's almost as if i was reading a novel assigned to us in literature...

masterpiece...

These are great. There is a great storyline and the sex is hot. Please tell us you are going to continue.

You need to Finish it sounds like Alan & Michiko will be together and who knows Maybe Kate will Join them. and with the Powers that he has there are 3 other Seeds out there to be Dealt with Not All may be as Righteous as Alan and Jack.

Great Story Please Continue

One of the best stories I have read on Lit. Where is the chapter you referred to: "Occidents will Happen"? and more, perhaps? Thanks for your efforts. Please continue or let us know if you have posted elsewhere.

I did not even think I liked mind control, but Alan is the absolute BEST!!!

want to see the rest of the story. must have more.

this story is the best have ever read on this site and would like for you to continue

MORRRREEEEE

Dear author,

I have enjoyed this story very much. It is terrific, interesting and very erotic.I found great joy in reading a story with a plot as well as much very hot and naughty sex. Thanks so much. I hope you will continue it or consider a sequel as i was disappointd that it ended. Although my eyes are happy as I could not stop reading it and they are tired now. I will look for more of your stories and hope you are aware of how much pleasure you have given me and, I am sure, many other readers. Great work thanks for the efforts.

Loved your work, but I do wish it had another chapter for a real ending, and maybe, if you got ambitious, a sequel.

EXCELLENT STORY. LOVED HOW YOU INTERSPERSED THE MYSTERY WITH THE EROTIC SIDE.WHEN I FINISHED WITH ONE CHAPTER I COULD NOT WAIT UNTIL I COULD START ON THE NEXT ONE.