All Comments on 'Alan Ch. 28'

Well Hopefully We Will Get The Next Chapter Soon

give us more chapters,your story one of the best on this site.

No matter what anyone says this is one of the most interesting and complex stories in erotica. You must keep on writing for us.

Thank you,

Joel

Another quality chapter in Alan, I hope to see more in the near future. It would be a shame to leave the story at this point, there is so much more that can be done in Alan's life; his college life, career with the company, power development, and of course other experiences with the women in his life, current and future, that can be thought up. Keep up the good work!

This is a great world you have made, and I'm glad that you keep the entries coming fairly quickly. Many are awaiting the next installment, so try not to torture us, ok? Thanks

Among the top 5 in the past 4 years I read Literotica.

Pls keep posting.

with my best regards B

This was a fanastic storyline! I am definatly looking forward to the next installments.

You have written a really super story but please, please, please, PLEASE continue it. And asap would be very nice! Thanks

why so long between stories? please hurry

I'm rather new to this site, but I found Alan fairly quickly and really took to it! Great story, great kinky sex-- What a team. Don't keep me waiting long for the rest ;) Thank you.

This is an excelant series. I can't wait to read more about Alan and his future adventures. Maybe finding a 3rd Vessel?

We know it's summer time and there's vacations and stuff to do, but think about someone (us losers) other than yourself!!! ;-)

I have been waiting very impatiently and i'm starting to get worried that this is the end... please, don't let it be!! we need more!!

ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! Bring on more!

This is one of the best reads on this site.. Please keep it going

This story line is great, a lot of very hot stuff, and a good story to it as well, I've read everything so far and I'm starting to wonder if you are going to leave me and the rest of your readers hanging with this story. WE WANT MORE lol, so give it to us!

More Please...This is an intense read...I can't wait for the next chapter...

Outstanding series. Please consider continuing your story (or at least let us have an ending). Thanks for the great read.

Love this series. Please write More!!!!!

A pleasure to read--so much so that I couldn't take the time to vote until I'd read them all! (Sorry.) Oddly evocative, for me, of Robert Heinlein; not of anything he wrote, actually, but perhaps something he MIGHT have written in this less-constrained era. I hope the long interval after this one doesn't mean you've given up the pen, or the keyboard; best of luck.

when are wqe going to see the next part of this story we seem to have been wating ages for it.

best story i've ever read...period!

been awhile since I read these stories, but just as good the second time around. Still wish you would put it to rest and give me an ending... what was the conversation ,how did end up,in bed having his child ... please ,please give me and ending, or let someone else do it.

thank you

Mike from Texas

I read this story a while ago and have checked back periodically for updates, but none have come. Please write more!

more this is really great stuff

this is amazzzziiinnnngggg stuff, if anything bad can be said its that it lacks description in the sense that you tell to much not descibe... which the hardest thing for author to perfect and the hardest thing for a avid reader to express in words what it is. I hope that helps, i truely like your work so i hope what i say is constuctive.

I read all 28 chapters in one go I just could not stop till the end .So Please Please write some more chapters

[__]D

It would be better if you did some kind of omnibus, with maybe four or five stories joined into one.

Please continue the story.

You sir, are a God among men.

plz continue it

pls carry on this is simple the best of the best story i have read about mind control on the web ever

this is the most amazing story i have read.

you should seriously consider to make this story into a book.

ive found several incredibly gifted authors on this page and i can proudly say that you are definatly top 3.

if not the best.

as i said you. consider writing this into a published book.

from a fanatic book lover.

That was a great Story and cant wait for the next. definetly one of my favorites on here

is one of the best i have read, dont deprive us of the rest

Thank you,for an excellent story. Hope to read more of this tale. One of the best I've read.

Please continue the story.

I love this story please continue it.

Some people can write a story. Others can create a new and exciting universe right before your eyes. I find these Creators to be the true artists, and you, dear author, are one of them.

Not only that, but you're also giving away your creation free of charge... That is some altruism!

Your fan.

the best I ever read here, CONGRATS!

keep going.

Awaiting for the oncoming chapters

Is this the last one? Cuz I would hate it if it was.

Excellent work so far. I have enjoyed every chapter. Now that I'm at the end of the existing chapters, I can pause and comment. It has been a fantastic journey so far and I'm excited to see how the future unfolds for the characters.

Still needs a bit of editing in some chapters but that is easily overshadowed by the strength of the plot. One thing that I appreciate is that when you bring back in characters from several chapters ago, you remind us a bit about them. With so many girls "participating" with Alan, sometimes it is easy to lose track.

Keep up the good work.

...waiting for the next and final chapter maybe...

Mike from Texas

I've read alot of stories in my life but truth be told this has got to be the absolute best by far, please continue with this one, there is so much more left to reveal about all the characters.

It would be a great shame for this to be the last story in this series. Much like a main stream story the penultimate chapter is always the one where advberstiy is overcome, and the bad guy is defeated. Followed by a final chapter providing the wind up with tying up of loose ends and the assurance that the characters are 'complete' 'happy' whatever blows your hair back. You need one more chapter to finalise this as one of/if not the best running story on literotica. kep up the good work!

I have read the whole series and you just keep getting better.... PROFESSIONAL is the word. Keep it up!

wowow... I loved this series. I can't wait for the next chapter. if there is one.

EXCELLENT STORY. LOVED HOW YOU INTERSPERSED THE MYSTERY WITH THE EROTIC SIDE.WHEN I FINISHED WITH ONE CHAPTER I COULD NOT WAIT UNTIL I COULD START ON THE NEXT ONE.

Loved your work, but I do wish it had another chapter for a real ending, and maybe, if you got ambitious, a sequel.

Dear author,

I have enjoyed this story very much. It is terrific, interesting and very erotic.I found great joy in reading a story with a plot as well as much very hot and naughty sex. Thanks so much. I hope you will continue it or consider a sequel as i was disappointd that it ended. Although my eyes are happy as I could not stop reading it and they are tired now. I will look for more of your stories and hope you are aware of how much pleasure you have given me and, I am sure, many other readers. Great work thanks for the efforts.

MORRRREEEEE

this story is the best have ever read on this site and would like for you to continue

want to see the rest of the story. must have more.

I did not even think I liked mind control, but Alan is the absolute BEST!!!

One of the best stories I have read on Lit. Where is the chapter you referred to: "Occidents will Happen"? and more, perhaps? Thanks for your efforts. Please continue or let us know if you have posted elsewhere.

You need to Finish it sounds like Alan & Michiko will be together and who knows Maybe Kate will Join them. and with the Powers that he has there are 3 other Seeds out there to be Dealt with Not All may be as Righteous as Alan and Jack.

Great Story Please Continue

These are great. There is a great storyline and the sex is hot. Please tell us you are going to continue.

just finished reading the whole thing....

all i can say is...

this is the first thing i have seriously read that has something to do with porn...

it's almost as if i was reading a novel assigned to us in literature...

masterpiece...

Are you going to finish this story? We are waiting for you to continue. This is very well written and very enjoyable

its been 4 years since i first read this story and its just as captivating now as it was the first time. i wish that where ever you are in this world that your passion for this story would be reignited and we could finally continue this journey with alan

I just read through the entire storyline, and I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter! I cannot wait for your next chapter!

Great Story From Begin to end... Just don't end it here. Thanks

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. Your finishing the story lines would be greatly appreciated. Many thanks for your talented efforts.

This whole saga is brilliant and to see it stop is such a shame. What's worse is that you aren't even around to see this, let alone respond.

So I'm writing this in the hope that you come on one day and see this and continue your epic saga.

Started reading this thinking it would be a pretty standard erotic teen mind control story and it really turned into a satisfying story with an interesting plot line, I'm not even all that disappointed that it obviously ended before the author intended, because the major plot line did get tied up in a satisfactory manner.

I really enjoyed your story. It was both extremely erotic and very mentally stimulating as well. I was riveted to the story, unable to to quit reading until I finished. I love the fact that it was plot driven and not just about fucking. I can't wait until your next installment.

i really loved your story ,

at first i thought it was going to be a teen mind control fuck story,

but it turn out to be a fantastic soul gripping story,

please you can`t end it there , what about michiko`s meeting with alan.

there is so much more that alan , jack ,michiko ,kate can do.

please please please more story .

yours thankfully tony

just started this series and fucking love it. I really hope you return to continue/finish it. but still one of the best I've read on any site, if not the best. you're one of very few talented authors who can successfully write a series. happy holidays, your good ol friend anonymous

thanks for a great 28 chapter story! I really hope you continue this story!

The Best Story i have ever Red here!!!

Can we see some more of this please? Thanks

one of my favorite stories. I tbink we would all like to see more chapters. If not for your fans then continue for the characters. They aren't complete. wouldn't you like to complete them? We would like to see thestory completed. Thanks.

Nice job. I can't believe I read the whole thing. Intertwined story lines, character development, good and evil, and really great sex.

I'm hoping that Chapter 29 "Occidents will happen" is on the way. Please. For Michiko's sake.

I just finished all 28 chapters and enjoyed the story immensely. I see you promised another chapter but have not yet posted anything. Please say you will be continuing this story!!

I really liked the story but i don't think he'll be posting again. Check the dates he posted these stories. Been a long time.

3rd June 2006 I wunder wat appened - great pity that such talent is being or has been wasted.

I really wish he will revive. I loved reading all the chapters. Sad to think he won't write again.

Is there going to be a next chapter? I was hoping Alan and Katie would marry or at least get engaged for real.

I really hope to see more of this intriguing story.

All I can do is repeat what others have said. This is one of the best stories in Literotica. I really do hope that one day you will continue the story. I have you marked as a Favorite and check back frequently with the hope that you have returned.

Great Story, I couldnt stop reading it.

great story :)

pity there isn't any more :(

yea im guilty should be working and im reading your story damn need to run to work now..

This is one of the best stories i have read, ever. I could easily compare this with works like The Hunger Games, or Harry Potter, and others like it. In the end i didn't even care about the sex, i just wanted to read about what came next in the story. I really hope that there is, or will be more.

I really enjoy it would like to read the ending I have read it twice so far

I to enjoyed the story... It truly is a shame but six years has passed.

I would entreat you to finish. Please consider it.

I kept thinking I had to go to bed, had to get things done.. but couldn't. I just kept coming back for more.

Thank you for a great read and great sex!

PLEASE continue! This is a work of art. It's a shame to let it go now.

Wonderful story that kept my attention all the way. Will you be writing "Occidents Will Happen"? Looking forward to reading your stories again. Pete

this was a pretty awsome series. can't wait for the next chapter and dose he tell kate of his powers?

Great story please continue.

Where is the next chapter? It has been a long time and I was so wanting to find out what Michiko had to tell Alan and also wanted to see how Kate reacted when she found out about his powers via the "seed". I am also curious as to whether any children from their marriage would possibly somehow inherit any powers of the seed genetically? I know it has been over 6 years but it isn't unheard of for stories to have that much time between chapters!

Can't wait for more!

There's no sadder thing to me as a reader, than to read a wonderful story as this one and come to the end just to find it unfinished. Since it's been over six years seems we will only be able to wonder what happen to Allan and Kate.

Very good read, and definitely one of the best series I have read so far. Please continue the story. It has been almost 7 years since Michiko promised to have that conversation with Alan....don't you think he has waited long enough?

PLEASE Finish this story. :)

I LOVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE CONTINIU!

This has been a real joy to read...........That being said I am with every other comment I have read. I wish you could continue it juliancoreto. But thank you for taking the time to share what you have!

PLEASE FINISH THE STORY!!

As per the title I went looking a few years back after reading this story for the first time, and found a final chapter. I cant be 100% sure that it was written by JC, but it was under his name on a site, and seemed to be written by the same hand as the rest of the series.

It doesn't take place chronologically after this chapter, as far as I remember it being explained, the author had simply gotten busy with life and did most of the writing for this story on the bus or train or something, and no longer had that time in his life. He stated that after being pursued to continue the story he wrote a final chapter that happens years after the initial story.

It wasn't a story continuation, just more of an update of how the main characters lives turned out, and with Allen finally telling Kate about his power set and everything. More of a story review, update, and closing so that the tale would have on official ending.

I encourage anyone who has read this series to head out into the wild blue yonder of ye ole internet and start doing a few searches for Alan Ch 29 juliancoreto. You may eventually come across it. I honestly don't remember where I found it, or what search engine or sights I was digging through, or if its even still out there anywhere. Either way for anyone whose re-read the story or just finished it and now looking at said comments. I urge you to follow the above if you really wanna see the ending... or well at the least what I think is ment to be the ending from the author.

i am truly delighted to have read this story. please continue and finish the story

its a shame that a great writer left Literotica Hoping they went into professional writing and did not give up on it, would love to see more of your work either new or continuing this story line if you have continued please submit here or where we can find more.