by NiceyJane123
ignore these idiots and take the story where you want to as long as it makes you happy someone else out there will be too keep writing you make some of us out here very happy
Good tale but it kinda flies in the face of the first chapter which was much hotter. I don't know why but it doesn't work for me as well.
Bring back the hot hot hot Alex, the studly marine, not this 18 year old school boy.
Sorry if this seems harsh, this has the potential to be a great series, but of the two stories this is the week link.
The first chapter was great. This seemed slapped together. Like she would just fuck Jason after getting utterly destroyed by Alex's cheating.
IS that he WOULD see his kids. She couldn't top him. Nor would a Court stop him from having visitation. The whole thing seems unrealistic, even for fiction.
Fuck no. No way I'd take the cheating skank back. I wouldn't and have never cheated in the first place so bye-bye bitch. And I get to see my own kids.