by rosess
I really like the story but Alex continuing to ply Penelope with liquor is a little underhanded.
Although the overall story is good, it is at risk of becoming tedious.
It seems like she cares way more about this budding relationship than he does. He seems to be more interested in the conquest, the thrill of fucking a virgin. If Penelope doesn't play her cards right she is going to be totally fucked, figuratively.
I like this story but I am getting increasingly frustrated with Alex. I am really taking this personally lol. So as a writer, I believe that means you are doing an amazing job in keeping the readers interested!