All Comments on 'Alexa and Chantelle'

Great start. Looking for more chapters.

Well written, no typos or proofing needed. You set the stage well; I'm looking forward to more of the story. Thanks.

To say this is well-written is an understatement; besides the finesse of the writing, you've already drawn four distinct and intriguing characters (particularly our introspective Alexa) and have the material, it seems to me, for a great erotic novel.

I can only imagine it might be intimidating to follow-up on such a superb and tantalizing introduction but (assuming the publishers haven't already bought the story up!) I must beg you to give us more!!

This is already an involving tale, and I am sure you will have an eager audience for the rest of it!

Where's the story?

Love this. Excellent storyline. Great writing too. can't wait to read more :-)