All Comments on 'Alexandra Makes The Grade Ch. 01'

Can't wait to read more.

Well written; good set-up that promises a lot more to come. I like how you have two strong-willed people contending with each other, which adds a lot more zest than the normal "she seduces him, they have sex, yadda-yadda-yadda." Hope we see more.

I like the tension building, and Alex's frustration mounting. err, mounting frustration.

I like your start - well thought out and very well written. You certainly have a varied background as we see not just the normal, but also a great deal of fetishes.

great story, cant wait for further parts and more stories from you,

thanks for listing it,

Lots of details, lots of description. Far above the typical crap that appears on here. An excellent beginning to the story. How come there isn't the Red H thing next to it on the story page? And who puts the H there anyway?

Stories getting a rating of 4.5 or higher via voting get an H beside their story.

Could it be? Actual plot? Actual thought behind a story? I must be imagining things. Excellent story. I can't wait for the next chapter

This story has all the makings of a good one. One crit though, it was left incomplete even if there is a follow up chapter........