All Comments on 'Alexis'

Thank you for this gift of healing and salvation through trust and love.

Awesome!! Enough said….

Thank you for writing this heart touching story.

I have said it all before, your talent astounds me yet again!

I try to butcher this into filets …. This tale was about a soul numbing lost and Love , pure unconditional love …. Getting hurt in your soul is killing parts of you as well and it may calms but healing is another level ….. yes numbing yourself fits perfectly and so two souls coming together after getting more painful experiences instead of finding unconditional love ….. incest it’s called, but im not one to judge then one painful experience hunts the next …. You Wanda with your love filled magic pen wrote a real love tale about unconditional love with such finery and kindness, Thank You

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The best love story I have read yet. It’s beautifully written! Thank you.

A beautiful wonderful elegantly written classic absolutely the BEST I have read and I have read a LOT of stories on this site. I am a 70 year old white straight male and totally love all of this story

I am in awe of your ability to use words to convey the mechanics of the story but also your mastery over the setting , the mood and the love between Alexis and Robyn

Absolutely the very best!

Looking at the brief description of this story, I might have passed on it but for one thing: the author. Wanda never disappoints and she certainly does not disappoint this time. Simply another outstanding story from one of the best authors here or anywhere, at least as it pertains to erotic fiction. And my guess is, fiction of any style. So many thanks for sharing another great story, Wanda.

Five stars without doubt. Dee

Very well written. I definitely felt and believed the romantic feelings between the sisters. That loneliness they spoke of is all too real.

You write superbly well. Your characters are three dimensional, interesting and sexy, the storyline is perfectly paced, and you draw your reader in and give her pleasure. 5 stars seems inadequate, but as it is all that is allowed, you have mine 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

This was a beautiful story of sisterly love. I've never read this particular sub-genre before but I'm glad I did. No wonder this story got high praise in so many other comments from other stories by this author. They were right on the money. After a while it didn't matter that they were two women or sisters; to me, they were just two lonely, love-starved people that needed each other, to love each other in a way no others could. In the end, they found each other, even though they'd been right there next to each other all along.

"Robyn Emily Blake, you are my normal life." "All I need is you." Alright, time to cry.

Great story, great writing, totally believable characters. Somewhat high level of detailed description from beginning to end that could maybe be summarised in parts to give some sense of proportion to break it up a little, but that's a nitpick that doesn't take away from a highly engaging and entertaining story. Totally hooked me in, excellent job.

CristoforoColumbo has said it better than I could have done. Thank you, onehitwanda.

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Not a category I often read, but this was gorgeously written.

Always had a sister fetish. Rarely have I found a story to indulge it so well.

It’s unbelievable how good you write, and how consistently you’ve done it… Fantastic story, 10/10: I agree with every word of CristoforoColombo’s glowing comment.

Clearly I'm not the only straight male to get a huge amount from this superb story. Rather than feel the inevitable pressure, with heterosexual erotic writing, to keep reading as fast as possible to a conclusion, I was able to take this slowly, to enjoy it fully, to savour each aspect, like great lesbian sex (I can now suggest)? And I really appreciated that, and suspect it can also teach us men (well me at least) a lot about the female psyche and satisfying our partners, how despite the importance of the body, really good sex is in our heads and that there are no shortcuts to getting our heads to the point where the sex is mind-blowing for both partners. The quality of the writing and the genuineness of story, based on the so well-sketched characters, was always going to draw me back, but it never made me want or feel the need to rush – I actually wanted to spin it out. Yet I still find it difficult to work out what I feel and it's even harder to put that into words.

Just about everything has been said by others and I endorse every word of the praise (not having found any criticism in the comments I have read). I should have made notes as I was reading it. There were so many wonderful touches of education; culture; good taste; poignancy; dry humour (that several times made me laugh out loud), Lexi saying she lost her virginity to the second clarinet, one that comes immediately to mind, the dexterity of woodwind players' tongues which followed on, being another ( I was laughing with them); and there is deep, wonderful love, that made me wish I could have thrown myself so totally into a relationship. It's all clearly a fantasy and perhaps no one, or only a lucky few, ever get to experience something so rich and real and right in real life. And in that sense it transcends its genre and I could at least enjoy (almost experience) it vicariously. There is real insight here into human nature. The author make one reference to the Bard (though I don't recognise the two out of three being not bad, example, but she's clearly learned something from him about human nature and how to write something others will want to read for qa start. There is also originality, but most importantly, for me, there are solid, life lesson, perhaps just the one all embracing lesson, that many, perhaps most of us, at least at times, feel uncertain about ourselves, just like Lexi and Robyn (unless we are blinded by our own conceit); that there are no easy answers, but that there is nothing to lose from trying and everything to gain. I wish I have learned that sooner. This isn't a message from the story, but it reminds me of the saying that, 'It's better to love and lose, than never to love at all. I'm deeply indebted to OnehitWanda. Richard

Wow. You have a great writing style. Love it and your stories.

Thank you.

What a stunningly beautiful celebration of sisterly sex and love!

Absolute perfection. 5 all the way! I laughed. I cried. Then...well it's good that I already had the tissues out. Thank you!

IF ONLY I could give it 10 stars! This is an amazingly perceptive, moving story, told with dialogue that feels so natural it could be autobiographical. The characters tug at your heartstrings, as their story is universal... the search we make for love, for a place to belong, for happiness and contentment with our lot. Truth be told, it has echos of my own journey. Simply put, there is no finer collection of stories on this site, period. Colour me greedy, as I wish for more of them! But we must be content with whatever she gifts us. After all, Beethoven only wrote 9 symphonies.

OMG, what a beautiful, glorious story!!! Thank you❣️

Of all that there is, this is the best story about lesbian love. There is everything here: the character of the characters is well revealed, excellent dialogues, moments of intimacy (hugs, sisterly kisses, sisterly love) are well described, warmth and comfort are felt during reading. Perhaps it seems so because from this story I met the author... Don't know. But it's the one I've been rereading for the hundredth time.

One of the best, most genuine, pieces ever posted here at Lit.

I'm a straight guy with decently high standards for writing. This is the first lesbian story I've given 5* to, not because I have something against lesbian porn (although admittedly it leave me feeling .... excluded?) but because this is the first I have found that is so well written and is also evocative and expressive.

I'm a guy, but seriously loved the story.

As a writer, I am constantly on the lookout for stories that I want to learn from. Of course, every story has something for me to learn. But every once in a while, I find one amazingly insightful that I am certain has a lot to teach me. While I find such a story, I tag it to be able to come back to it "for reference".

This story got tagged.

A very well written story. Thankyou.

I know I am only a 70 year old married male, happily married for 45 years and as such I still have never ever got the smallest glimpse of the complexities of the female mind. And I know this is merely fiction, and therefore, by definition, made up and untrue and unreal.

But reading this story is the nearest I have ever been to even daring to hope that I understand the tiniest scintilla of how women think or feel or respond.

Thank you.

A R W

Hi, Love your work but you should know that this story has been pirated and is being sold on Amazon by 'John Xie'. A kind reader let me know he was selling one of my stories (turned out to be two) and I got them taken down.

Here is the link to your story so you can get it taken down.

https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0B5N11HBK?ref_=dbs_m_mng_rwt_calw_tkin_10&storeType=ebooks&qid=1656958002&sr=1-6&asin=B0B5N11HBK&revisionId=&format=4&depth=1

I love this beautiful tale. This lovely story is a demonstration of the weakness of the single-story-category system. I totally understand why it’s in “Incest/taboo”, because that’s the aspect that’s most likely to upset a random reader, but of course it’s mainly a Romance in its emotional content (which is why I like it), but could reasonably also be classified as “First Time” or, of course, “Lesbian”.

That was amazing. It was tender, beautifully paced, full of real emotion and deliciously sensual. When the sex came it was beautifully written and very erotic. The loving coda was the perfect ending. Thank you.

A beautifully crafted well presented story.

Experts tell me that Incest Stories have a higher appeal to readers coz of the naughty factor.

I disagree.

I find Incest stories to be either smutty poor grade rubbish not worth the time wasted reading them. Or else they are like this one an absolute gem.

So I really do enjoy stories like this one of Wanda's that are very well written, good character development, good plot development, plenty of feeling and emotions, all moving at a good even pace, and a hot sexy scene at the end.

There's a lot of love in that one little story.

I'm in the same frequency as AmatorVeritatis. I make also mine his/her words.

Long but satisfying story the first story or 2022 for me. l loved the romance and the slow buildup that showed they loved each other.

Seven or so years on Literotica and I've only just discovered this story. It has to be the loveliest and most tender story of its particular genre that I've ever read. Too many incest theme tales are nothing short of sleazy but not this one. It is near perfect and its sequel beckons strongly. You should be proud of this, Wanda.

(One carping point, even though it's only fiction: with Robyn's head injury, any alcohol should be strictly verboten, especially a strong malt whisky like Talisker.)

Brilliant so much love between the two girls especially after the loss of their parents. Well written and no typos, keep up the good work. Ten Stars!

Generally I find it very difficult to get invested in pure girl-girl stories, but all of your works are special from beginning to end, this one being no exception. Just wanted to make it known how much I appreciate you sharing your art with us.

Outside of the first episode of Hard Landing, this may well be the best first story in the history of Literotica.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It had great characters and a storyline that was sweet but realistic. And, in contrast to one of the earlier comments, even though I am completely heterosexual, the attitude shown in that feedback is definitely not "a guy thing". It's just sad and pathetic. Keep writing, it was wonderful!

Perfection. Thank you.

Need to add to more stars. Great story

Simply amazed !!!

Wanda your ability to reach out and capture the essence of the characters is amazing. You truly are a very talented aurthor. I have read through all of your stories several times. They move me even though I have read them before. Great stories with great characters. Keep up the great work. Thank you for your being you and remaining true to yourself.

Absolutely beautiful story. The previous comment might be one of the single dumbest things I've ever read on this site. Ignore it. Thank you for the stories.

I enjoyed reading this. But I have to be brutally honest. I realize that it's a guy thing, but I would have enjoyed it better if Alexis and Robyn were both portrayed as bisexual. If they were bi and still decided to be exclusive, then that would have been nice. And Alexis comes off as leaning towards lesbian with a bi vibe. But it seems like a total waste for someone as beautiful as you described Robyn to be not to have even a minor interest in guys. I knew a gorgeous Philippino lesbian when I was 19. It always made me sad that she wouldn't even let me engage in a platonic conversation with her much less than be her friend strictly because I was a man. She was a total heterophobe.

I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter nonetheless. I gave it a 4.

I couldn't remember where I read this before. I have thought of it more than once recently and hoped I would find it again. I had decided I was going to read Sketching Sophie again which I did yesterday. Looking over your list of works I decided to continue from the top. I think it took me less than a sentence to recognise what I had found. I'm going to work my way through the rest of your works. It will be time well spent. Thank you!

The warmth of the tale.

OnehitWanda is the yardstick against whom all the other authors on this site are judged! Very few come anywhere close, in my opinion.

Not really into g/g stories but it was well written. Thanks for sharing.

Very well written. Can’t wait to read more of your work.

Joey.

I couldn't agree more with cold_kisss. Look forward to reading more of your stories.

This is definitely the best story I've found on this site, and I'm honestly baffled at how well written it is! Thoroughly impressive, honestly. I love how they poke fun at each other, and have insecurities that consistently come out. And it's so intimate! You drew a very pretty picture to imagine, and it goes beyond words when reading this story starts to feel like a new experience.

Alexis and Robyn are so fucking lovable, and I want to give both of them a huge hug, because they deserve it.

Touching love story with beautiful girl girl love.

Thank you for sharing it.

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Incredible. Please keep writing more stories like this.

This story was wonderful is many ways...the thoughtful dialogue and carefully chosen words, the character development, the slower pace of the build up, and the emotional connection of the two girls made it super erotic. Loved it!

I am sorry that a 5 is the highest ranking available for this story. I believe out of the dozens of stories I've read on this site that this story ranks #1 of all time. So beautifully written with so much emphesis on the real love between these sisters. Thank you so much for such a beautiful story.

One of the best love stories on this site !

Such a wonderful tale, thanks for sharing the story of their love.

J

Generally I am not into reading about lesbian relationships and lesbian sex scenes do nothing for me but this was a beautifully written story and the love the sisters had for each other shone through.

Loved the setting and hesitancy as the story built and unfolded.

A true diamond in the rough

Again, the buildup was slow paced, but couldn't have been any other way. There was just too much of these two characters that wouldn't be understood without it.

And the lovemaking between them couldn't have been any better either, topped off with a loving end.

Another instant Favorite, and a very much deserved 5 Stars.

I don't understand how it took me so long to start reading your stories, as I've seen your name so many times. I'm really glad I have now.

You're story was very well written, it pulled me in so I felt like I was in it with the characters. I hope I get to read more of your work soon.

Well written, though I noticed a few typos.

Only thing bugging me is the use of single apostrophes to denote speech, makes it more difficult to read, since it doesn't register right to my eyes, making everything flow together, but I guess that's a regional thing.

Even though I wish everyone would stick to the more widely used Quotation Marks.

Love is simple.

Thank You.

This is a beautiful story of a love set free to grow. Thank you.

...beautifully written.

Both the sweetest story and the most sensual. I felt like I was there.

It's been a long time since I've felt so strongly the feelings that you've protrayed through your words. I'm usually a very empathetic person, but my life has been shitty, and so reading your work uplifted me for an hour or so. Thank you so much; you probably can't realize how much that hour's feeling felt good to me.

An amazing love story, that so very well done! Thank you so much for sharing this story with us!

Another stellar submission . I can't get enough

Very well written, it had me hooked. Although it's an erotic story, the love scenes were beautifully done and weren't tacky, and to be honest, even though I was turned on, I couldn't masturbate to the images you painted in my head, the story was just too good to be treated as a cheap thrill. Also, I'm not ashamed to admit as a man that there was a tender moment that gave me a lump in my throat, the love between the sisters was palpable. Many thanks for taking the time to write this for our enjoyment, I look forward to reading your other stories.

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This story gripped me. Was better than most small novels. The setting, the realism, and the palpable emotions...you should write actual books and/or series. R.

That was amazing. Regardless that they were sisters the love between them was palpable. Thanks

I truly laughed, cried and got VERY worked up while reading this. It was extremely well written and very special for me to read! Thanks, and being greedy now, more please!

Fantastic. Well written, I felt what these women were feeling, and I don't mean the sex because I'm a guy. I felt them as two passionate women learning to love. Amazing.

An erotic, emotional, story of growth and understanding loved it.

I rarely ever rate five stars but this one was well worth it!! You have a fantastic ability to engage the reader and the story just unfolds from there. I very much look forward to reading more of your work.

6 out of 5 stars i would give. Beautiful story, erotic as it is but its well written n how romantic it can be. Though i feel gutted as some of the words the author use remind me so.much of a person i cared, i emjoy reading e story. Kudos.

Beautiful is the only word I can use to describe this story. Yes it's humorous. Yes it's erotic. Yes it's well written. But it has that something extra that draws the reader into the emotions and feelings of the characters. The emotions and sensations transfer to the reader. Therefore, it is beautiful. Thank you.

Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I read Slow Dancing first. Then, as I do with writers who impress me, I read all their work chronologically, to access growth, etc. This beautiful story reinforces my opinion that, for stories of this caliber (U.S. English, sorry.), Incest/Taboo should be a subsection of Romance. If Lexi and Robs were life-long best friends, not sisters, the story would not otherwise change and still be a beautiful tale of Love and Awakening, followed by Lust,naturally. Five stars and I rest my case.

Beautiful story,erotic,loving,emotional,wonderful.

If you don,t mind me say your writing reminds me of Scattysue.

You do Not need to warn readers about gay content, LOL, they are already reading in the incest category. What, suddenly you (idiot anon feedback) have morals or boundaries?!? What a idiot!

What a lovely warm sensual story... very well written... hope u follow and write alot more as im a def fan..

Congrats.

Wonderful, wonderful story!

That was very well written. So loving and gentle between them. Erotic though as well. Really nice development of the story too. You didn't jump into the sex stuff too quick, but built on their relationship and hardship and such. Wow. One of my favorite stories ever.

really well written. the only critiques i have are that it was a little choppy at the the very beginning and the end had too much ego fucking. keep up the good work though

Very well written. You don't skip ahead you really pace yourself and build the story to an amazing climax followed by the sweet conclusion.

Oh my, yes! So lovely how both learned something, not just about one another, but themselves in such a loving, caring and totally erotic way. Thank you for the delightful story.

~M

Sweet.

Reading this while listening to "I'm wondering" by Katherine Train is the best feeling ever. Thanks so much for your efforts.

Second story of yours I've read - brilliant. Beautifully set out and building to a perfect ending.

Thank You!

Felt a deep feeling of warmth, and it felt like coming home to something beautiful that should be cherish. Makes a lonely soul feels welcome and loved. Thank you! :)

This was a ridiculously great story. I'm struggling to even put it into words at the moment. I would have read this story even without anything remotely sexual within the plot. I have to say, you are truly a wonderful author, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your pieces.

Absolutely masterful storytelling. This tale was so real, so funny, so soulful, and utterly beautiful. I feel like I just got an emotional ass-kicking! Bravo... Thank you for sharing this.

Just a simple story stretched 10 miles too long