by sissymaidallyson
I really liked the premise, first of all. I think you did a pretty good job of describing the feelings of this "good girl" as she went through a humiliating process. One thing that I thought you could have done more of is describing what her time in jail on Saturday and Sunday was like, and I also would have liked a more thorough description of the cavity search (that's a personal kink though). The ending was very good.
This story begins in the first person, then oscillates between third and first,