All Comments on 'Alice is Arrested and Goes to Jail'

by sissymaidallyson

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BrendaNWBrendaNWalmost 11 years ago
hot..

I would like to go thru that dressed as the T-gurl that I am..

notstpatricknotstpatrickabout 7 years ago
Nice Story Overall

I really liked the premise, first of all. I think you did a pretty good job of describing the feelings of this "good girl" as she went through a humiliating process. One thing that I thought you could have done more of is describing what her time in jail on Saturday and Sunday was like, and I also would have liked a more thorough description of the cavity search (that's a personal kink though). The ending was very good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Kind of Confusing

This story begins in the first person, then oscillates between third and first,

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