All Comments on 'Alien v Predator: Insemination Ch. 03'

awesome story cant wait for the next chapter

Keep up the writing!!

I know you have only added this but you know when the next chapter will be.

I'm glad you guys have enjoyed the story. As for anon 3's question, I don't yet know when the next chapter will be released. It will likely be some time off as I am rather busy at the moment with real life stuff plus I write stories on other sites besides this one.

You are an extremely talented writer in all aspects.

And I'm really glad to see your end note that Alicia will be making a return. Her in the first chapter, and what she did, was very very hot.

thanks

Amazing. Though, even the inital idea is offputting, I would've liked to see some breast action with the female xeno's. I know, I know, their chests look painful to... rub against... But maybe, some sort of... secret... foreskin, or other... that hid, and protected, the breasts from battle. I mean, the xenomorph's don't seem like the kind of aliens to leave the women at home, you know? So it would only make sense that the female xeno's who DO survive, are still capable of feeding their young. Yeah it might not sound right, but I love titties, so bite me. :P

Excellent continuation and build-up. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Love the detailed descriptions ;)

BRING ON CHAPTER 4!

i was hoping alicia would have another encounter with the predators

ps love the story

Loving the longer development by each passing chapter. Even more detailed descriptions plus physical dimensions of orifices and appendages (lengths, widths and circumference in inches) would paint an even better picture of things ;) . Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Yeah I remember you. Harpy got married, Countess has a boyfriend, LadyDeathStriker is gone, DeathWraith has gone AWOL and and the Dark Blood Organization might be gone soon. Such a shame. Oh btw my username was ValkyrieWrath.

Anyway this story got my soaked please bring in the 4th chapter! I love how you go so deep into the details. The Predator stories were amazing though I'm more of a Xenomorph gal. I kinda figured the Preds would be well endowed, I mean all that strength and muscle you know they're packing big. I can barely wait for chapter 4 so please hurry up! Oh maybe you can do a part when the male Predator ends up having to fight a female Xeno and thw two end up in the same situation as chapter 1 of this series. Huh sound pretty good?

P.S.

Hey, Anonymous01/30/12. I wanted to fuck Cetanu655, Deathdrop, Shadowwall and DeathWraith. Who'd you think about doing? This is kinda weird since I'm still a virgin and much younger thanthose guys. Besides none of them have accounts here anyway. It would be weird if they knew I thought about having sex with them. Plus Wraith would NEVER let me live that down. He can be a jerk sometimes but sometimes I find him to sound(have never seen him) kinda hot.

Absolutely hot! More please!

http://fukurononezumi.blog90.fc2.com/blog-entry-79.html

http://fukurononezumi.blog90.fc2.com/blog-entry-84.html#more

This Japanese site has drawn Aliens and Predators in a female form so if anyone or the author wants a visual inspiration here it is. By the way awesome stories.

This series is excellent, is there any update on chapter 4

i hope you come back to this, i know how hard it is to keep up with thankless internet comments as your only sustenance. so first thank you for your story,

are the other sites you post to sci-fi/fantasy ish? if so where?

on a side note i kinda wanted the queen to get involved im sure after a long day of running a hive and overwhelming colonies im sure she could use a stress release.

now i have to check out your krogen mass 3 story.

i hope you find your muse to finish this

Glad you (and other people commenting) enjoyed the story. I am steadily working on a chapter 4. However, it is going slow because of work, plus I'm working on other stories that aren't posted on this site. So, although it may seem like I'm not doing anything because I haven't posted something here in a while, I am actually writing stories.

The bulk of my erotic stories can be found on hentai foundry. I have some things there that aren't posted here. Feel free to check it out. My username on that website is the same as this. Cheers :)

ok so first off, i love your name. second of all i got bored and started searching for weird erotic stories and BOOM this. Thank you so much. I am going to check back every day just to see if chapter 4 is up. You are a genius and i am recomending this to all my erotic friends. I am an expert on both aliens and predators (and for that matter all comics whether marvel, darkhorse, or dc) as i have even gone as far as learning how to write the entire Yautja language (yautja is the real name for the predator species) so if you ever need information about either of these or any other subject having to do with video games, comics, or supernatural, please feel free to contact me and i will give you 100% right information. Contact me anytime at parkour.hell@gmail.com

looking forward to part 4 man

Looking forward to more of the story. Enjoied what I have read

this kind of story is what makes me want to be a part time writer. amazing story, love the descriptions, and am looking forward to Chapter 4. (P.S if you can, in chapter 4 i would include all the characters included so far, adding the Queen in at the end would be great!)

Heya all,

To my devoted readers who may still be following this story and hoping for an update, I can tell you that it is forthcoming. I should have it up sometime this week. And as for Anonymous (11/7/12)'s comment, I actually plan on doing exactly what you said with Chapter 5 rather than Chapter 4. Ch. 4 is more going to be female human x male xenomorph whereas ch. 5 is when all the characters come together into the story (in more ways than one) :)

Will he die

Don't kill him off... he should live just purely to serve the xenos forever ;)