All Comments on 'All Business Ch. 03'

Of all the blackmail/ sex stories I've read on Literotica, this is the best.

Here is what I liked:

The protagonist isn't wealthy, or a navy Seal, or a high-tech genius.

Faith doesn't fall in love with him, or his dick. Each encounter is painful for her.

Faith's humiliation is exacerbated by the protagonist being cranially challenged.

The story is expandable: we haven't dealt with Mellisa, Or for that matter, Ron.

Is Faith also being blackmailed by Ron or Melissa?

At least so far, the protagonist isn't intent on sharing, or making Faith a public slut.

( no instructions on dress, no risky public sex...) This will keep the relationship secure, and ensure Faith is trapped at least until her youngest child graduates from college/university.

I would have liked more dialog from Faith; even if it was just futile pleading to avoid what was going to happen to her. Faith seems too passive.

I've avoided commenting, for fear of jinxing things, but you deserve positive feedback.

Thanks for writing this for us.