All Comments on 'All Talk'

The intro to the sory said they were on a train not a bus.

Actually, I don't think you can say whether or not the "action" takes place on a train or a bus. I was picturing a train myself (because of the title), but the setting doesn't much matter to the story I think. It's enough to know that the man and woman are strangers talking in a semi-public place.

continue!!!

very hot stuff ;)

Keep up the great work!

Jim

Keep on going, very different but very sexy

cant wait for more

This is so hot, love all of it. please keep on writing!

Have yet to meet this hot fox. Pity! (I think I could answer better than this guy does!)