All Comments on 'Allison Wonderland Ch. 01'

loved this story cant wait to see what happens in chapter 2

I swear I had an orgasm, but there was no sex. Haha.

Part 2 better be up ASAP. Grrrrrrr! :p

the sparks are certainly flying there !!!- I just can't wait how the story between the two unfolds!

Thanks to everyone who read my story, I love the feedback. I'm working on the second one, and it should be done very soon. If you're lucky ;)

You're good! I like the drama and the subtlety. Where's chapter 2?

Can't wait to find out what Allison's story is.

can't wait until the next installment

really enjoy it I can tell it is going to be good

your Allison character is intriguing!

looking forward to your next installment on this gem.

The story is so intriguing, Im hooked....please continue soon, soon Yuno!!!

I've written part 2 and another short story yesterday and submitted them. Now just a few days and they will hopefully be approved.

Love it, absolutely love it.

Agree with all the comments. Sensational.

Olivia

Amazing, this chapter deserves much more credit then it's got :) loved it