by xenophile
Loved it. Went to your page to read other stories you had written and noticed this was your first one. Gonna have a high benchmark to meet if you write any other stories. Hope you do continue, and can't wait to read them.
Quite an enjoyable read, from start to finish. Please, continue the good work! I hope to see more!
i admit i wasn't gonna read it at first, but then your story sucked me in and found i really enjoyed your tale. keep writing and hope to read more from you.
I am an avid D&D gamer, this was excellent... hope to see more soon! <<Pretty please????>>