by xenophile
I am an avid D&D gamer, this was excellent... hope to see more soon! <<Pretty please????>>
i admit i wasn't gonna read it at first, but then your story sucked me in and found i really enjoyed your tale. keep writing and hope to read more from you.
Quite an enjoyable read, from start to finish. Please, continue the good work! I hope to see more!
Loved it. Went to your page to read other stories you had written and noticed this was your first one. Gonna have a high benchmark to meet if you write any other stories. Hope you do continue, and can't wait to read them.