All Comments on 'Alpine Hideaway Magic Ch. 03'

Went to your member page and saw chapter 3. Haven't even read the first word yet and had to thank you for it. Read 1 and 2 yesterday and loved them and was hoping for a 3rd. Thanks for fulfilling my wish.

There is only so many times you can say : cow tongue, carnal display, pearly dew, fish drippings, turd tunnels, etc. in one story

Your main character being a spectator made this chapter a bit shity, if you ask me. It was sad honestly. In a lot of different ways. Hopefully your next chapter is better.

YES. Having the main character as a spectator for a whole chapter is very annoying. It would have been much more interesting if Stephan had been included in their orgy. By your own writing, Oma could control what they would remember afterward and three eager cocks could very well take care of two voracious cunts. I've read this whole series more than once, now, and Oma never really teaches him anything except to become transparent, give a woman an orgasm, and bring down lightening from thunderclouds when he cums. Everything else Oma does herself while claiming that Grandson is a powerful healing wizard.