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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
too short

Altitude Fun could easily be made into a full length novel. The story and characterizations are very good as is, but this story should be longer.

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I've been reading the stories on here for a few years and have finally got around to beginning to write my own. Any feedback is much appreciated.