All Comments on 'Always'

by MartinFierro

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
A sweet and loving short story

Really hot and erotic sex between a very loving couple.

Nicely done, well written and edited.

Thanks for the read.

William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
One of the best

This short story is one of the finest examples of good erotic literature I have had the pleasure of reading for some time.

My congratulations to the author for this first contribution to Literotica.

I hope it will prove to be the first of many.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Beautiful writing. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

This was beautiful. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Best Submission

One word can be said- more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Keep it coming!

Tender and steamy… I hope the author is up for a round two.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous