by LilyDecember
I really liked this story. Though it was short it was cute, and very well written. I hope you decide to expand on it, I think you could go a long way with this story. Good luck!
I would like to see you expand on this story, has lots of promise!
write more this is worthy of my vote saying 5 of 5 plz need more lolz
You've created a rabid crowd for your writing!!! :) Better keep the wild things entertained at regular intervals! Great start! More please! Quickly now!
I think that answers the question as to whether or not people want more. Pretty please write more before the crowd gets restless and gathers upon your doorstep with torches (the nonbattery kind) blazing. But hay, no pressure!
Thanks for the teaser. Come on now, you know you got the goods and you have bated us well. Please CONTINUE!!!!!!
please hurry, you have set the bait and i am hooked and wanting more
That was barely more than a teaser and do hope you already have more writing as it would be nice to read a much longer section. Great Start.
i think this could be good i agree with others some details about them all as you develop the story
Oh please your just teasing with that begining hope to see alot more from you, your an excellent writer, but you must get a bit more detail in. It would be awesome to know a touch about your characters and i hope you do include it in the next installment if you write one.
Oh definitely want more. Be nice if you could describe Ruari though. I love how it's set in Ireland too hehe.
Definitely more and soon please!! Love what u have written so far ... But its just a teaser to what could be a great story :)
This is a great beginning. Hopeful ill see ur next instalment up. XD fingers crossed.
Loved the start here. I really hope you continue on
Great start! Hope you add more soon, I'd very much like to see where this goes! :)
I like your first chapter. I think you set the tone but left us yearning for that little bit more. I hope you post another chapter soon.
If it makes you write more, this is my comment,
write more please. 5* for further encouragement
This was a great start to what I can already feel, will be an awesome story. Please write quickly. Looking forward to much, much more!
Nicci
I usually won't read new authors that start with a first chapter....too many disappoint and don't bother finishing their stories. Nothing frustrates me more than getting into a story only to have it abandoned by its author, but if you promise to keep this one up, I promise I'll read all of it. You're off to a great start!!!
For some reason, I can't get the stars to click.. 5 stars, darlin'... I am looking forward to the next chapter.. :)
Was rather short, but quite wonderful despite this. Certainly caught my interest. Look forward to reading more from you.
This was a pretty good story, so I'll wait for the next chapter. But, the second paragraph was a little confusing. Just work on your clarity, other than that good work
I really liked how things are beginning, looking forward to reading the rest of it.