by Boxlicker101
But put more speaking in your stories. Your descriptions are great, but for myself, a truly great story combines both descriptions of what is happening, and "spoken" parts as well.
First of your stories I've read. I'm impressed with the explicit techniques you describe; ever consider writing sex manuals? The story is sexy and informative, just needs a little more "personality". After all, these are people having all this technically terrific sex ; I'd like to hear just a little more from and of them. Excellent story over all.