All Comments on 'Alyssa's College Threesome'

by Boxlicker101

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Pretty good...

But put more speaking in your stories. Your descriptions are great, but for myself, a truly great story combines both descriptions of what is happening, and "spoken" parts as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great sex and great grammer

First of your stories I've read. I'm impressed with the explicit techniques you describe; ever consider writing sex manuals? The story is sexy and informative, just needs a little more "personality". After all, these are people having all this technically terrific sex ; I'd like to hear just a little more from and of them. Excellent story over all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
damn

lucky ass guy!!! 3 somes r so fun. keep writing dear!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep writing more

Awesome amazing story loved every word

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