All Comments on 'Alyssa's College Threesome'

by Boxlicker101

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep writing more

Awesome amazing story loved every word

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
damn

lucky ass guy!!! 3 somes r so fun. keep writing dear!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great sex and great grammer

First of your stories I've read. I'm impressed with the explicit techniques you describe; ever consider writing sex manuals? The story is sexy and informative, just needs a little more "personality". After all, these are people having all this technically terrific sex ; I'd like to hear just a little more from and of them. Excellent story over all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Pretty good...

But put more speaking in your stories. Your descriptions are great, but for myself, a truly great story combines both descriptions of what is happening, and "spoken" parts as well.

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