All Comments on 'Amanda's Story'

I was unable to read past the second paragraph. Your editing, or lack thereof, is terrible. I think you should edit and then re-post.

Give up any ideas you have of writing! You and this story are awful!

this died as soon as you started talking about caning that puts it in the BDSM area not incest remove this story and properly post it in the proper area

'Nuff said!

I am beginning to think this was written tongue-in-cheek. You tried to include as many sexual practices as possible without any believable storyline, maybe just to see the feedback. Nice try!

The mindless zombies won't mind this story. In fact, they'll say others here are nit-picking. They'll also ask, "Where's your stories?"

I, too, read this as a parody of literotica, and if that is the author's intent, then he succeeded quite well.