All Comments on 'Amber's Ordeal Ch. 01'

great story. Hope to see more

Amber is a knockout with "DD"s! Trent chose his "animal" WELL!! Great start to the story!!

Prospective Resale

Tent takes Amber captive for resale as a pleasure slave. He's concerned about delivering Amber in an "undamaged condition." Yet though Trent has Amber bound, he lallows Amber shoes and boots but eads her naked under the blazing Arizona sun, likely to burn a paleface.

Wearing a hat or cap in the Southwest is more than just fashion. Ten gallon hats, stetsons and baseball caps do more than add local color. They're a necessity.

The imagery of the landscape is excellent, but in adequate attention was played to climate of the southwest in late spring/early summer..

Perhaps Trent ought move Amber on foot in the early hours of the morning when he's leading Amber on foot to the delivery point.

Still a good story.