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All Comments on 'Amber's Submission'

by BecauseYoureFilthy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good story but...

Great story but Amber took off her thong twice in this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Liked it

...and grew some pubic hair

BecauseYoureFilthyBecauseYoureFilthyover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for the feedback. My dislike of proofreading shows through I guess. There'll be more coming, and hopefully with less continuity errors this time.

MagnusFraterMagnusFraterover 10 years ago
Well done

Excellent story, nice basis for a continuing theme and a descent into complete submission.

BecauseYoureFilthyBecauseYoureFilthyover 10 years agoAuthor

Why thank you Magnus. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Her thong....

...was taken off twice. Good story but watch out for those errors.

SoftKtty24SoftKtty24over 2 years ago

Looking forward to reading another chapter in this possible series. Great start, in spite of the error.

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