All Comments on 'Amber's Summer of Love Ch. 01'

Wow, I really loved this story, I couldn't stop reading, it really turned me on. I know how this girl feels. Please keep writing, I want to read more.

This is a great romance story. It has advanced so fast, I cannot see how you are going to be able to extend it to novel length. Keep writing, I am waiting in anticipation for the rest of the story.

One point on grammar, you used the subjective case 'Sam and I' when you should have used he objective caseppose Amber could have made he error, but, given how bright her character is, that does not seem likely.

To clarify, Subjective vs objective, it is correct to write, "Sam and went to the beach." because "Sam and I" is the subject of the sentence. but in the following sentence,

The objective case is required.

Melanie met Sam and me at the beach.

Sam and me is the subject of object, the people Melanie met.