All Comments on 'Amelia's Rite of Passage'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
mmm... so very HOT

Incredible, sensual, steamy... my only complaint was that it ended too soon. Please continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
So Sensuel!!!

Just lovely the way the shoot was done it was just so erotic!!! The vacations just started, let's hope there are more shoots.... Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Beautiful!

Wonderful build-up, described so sensuously! There have to be more shoots with more sexy clothing, and some sexy stiletto heels also!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More please!

Please continue!

mikke20041mikke20041almost 17 years ago
Beautiful!

Beautiful,sensuous, and well written. I felt like I was there. Great ending. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Excellent !!!!!

What a fabulous, sexy, erotic and so descriptive seduction of a young woman. I can't help imagining what it would be like to read more of these three, could we have more ???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

mmmn Love it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Kind of Weird...

My name is Amelia so it was kind of weird to read this, but it was still a great story! :)

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