All Comments on 'American Whore Story - Asylum Ch. 01'

Very well done!! bravo!! I look forward to future installments

I'm very intrigued how this series will play out... Great start!

The good news is I've finished three chapters total, so two more. They need editing yet though.

The bad news is that I started a new job 6 weeks ago that is consuming my writing time which is now almost non existent now. The inspiration individual is pressuring me constantly though, so there's a fighter in the corner.

I haven't written anything but this in a long time now.

TheTITLover is a great writer, and I know personally that this is just the beginning of a fantastic series that you will all love! It will make you not only wanna masturbate, but will also be very riveted with where the story goes as well. I love working with him, he is so talented (and patient), and tbh, the chapters get better and better and hotter as well. Thank you so much Tittyman!! and you're correct, I will NOT stop bugging you to make sure you continue this series!! ;)

As a big fan of the tv series, American Horror Story this definitely peaked my interest. I have to say that so far you've done an excellent job of sucking me in! I enjoyed the imagery and writing style, the characters that have been introduced already have me intrigued, and most importantly the sex scenes are very erotic. I anxiously await what will come next! Thanks again! -James

I did not know of the series this story is based on but it doesn’t make it any less erotic and sexy. The characters, story line and detail were fantastic. I found this while in my office and had not option but to lock the door and continue ready, barely making it to the end of the story before having to release all of my own built up excitement. When is the next chapter coming out…..I cant wait.

This was one of the hottest stories I have ever read. Great work!

That was a damn hot story. I don't know the TV series but would love to have Debi work her magic on me all night!

pretty damn hot setup.....will definitely be reading the next chapters......only thing.....*since i'm a sucker for the good guy winning*....could you arrange it so at the end the bad guys get it and the good guy gets out...or decides to make his stay there or wherever .....just my .02

I know Debbie and how hot she is. The story is very good and extremely well written. Can not wait to read the following parts.

I'll say it's "ok". Not what I expected, but a great premise for a story. Many times, simpler is better.