All Comments on 'Amulette de Puissance'

I've always found the idea of Vampirism intrigueing and on the erotic side, more so. I give your story the thumbs up it deserves short but sweet, love to see more. Keep it up!

While I enjoy this story, it has several issues. A constant switching between past and present tenses, for example, and then there's this sentence which repeats the word "prick" three times - something which every writer should know to avoid: "Debbie kneels in front of Duncan, taking his warm, hard throbbing prick in her hand, slipping his warm erect prick between her cold lips softly sucking on his prick."