by OneTwoBuckleMyWorm
but good writing for a first post.
I suspect you might enjoy some of my dark tales too.
Would have been good if there had been some after care, yes it was rape but it was still only a scene and she deserved some care after all that. Plus he just leaves her in the park how is she to get home hurt and her clothes ripped. I actually felt a tear in my eye for what she went through. He is not a good master and I would lose all trust for him after this stunt.
As many others have said, it was a bit dark for my taste. I can definitely appreciate your talent, and I understand the craving, but it's simply not my preference. I do hope you'll continue writing, as it would be a shame to lose your talent becase of a differing in taste. :)
~shysubmissivegirl~
I loved it... I like dark writing... and I say yes it's not for everyone... but please don't stop because of some of these people comments...
Can't wait to read more of your stories :)
need the backstory. Most excellent! Short, sweet and simple. It is what it is, and that's all that's needed. Bravo!