All Comments on 'An Amazing Discovery Ch. 17'

While there are some obvious grammatical errors in your writing, the story itself is wonderful. Can't wait for the next chapters...yes, CHAPTERS! You cannot finish this without getting Jane & Jennifer situated together with ... Red??? Love it, can't get enough of it, want it, and, well, just continue it OK?

You are doing a very good job with this story. Keep up with the good work. I can't wait for the next chapters

Let's have the pregancy... please... possibly their secret becoming public... and accepted...???