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Click hereJade's body was on fire and she turned to grab Gabi's hair. She pulled her lover's mouth to her and shared a fiery kiss. Her tongue plunged in and out of her lover's, stealing her breath, trading her own, until she felt her climax threaten to overwhelm her. Her lids were clenched tight, her fingers a tangled mess in Gabi's blonde curls and just as she felt Mike's body grow taunt, she pulled her lips from her lover's and screamed.
"Gabi!"
Jade's hips rose up to meet Mike's thrust and her come flooded him. She felt him push into her more and knew he was erupting again in the condom. She touched Gabi's lips and closed her eyes as she came slowly down from her sparkling high. It wasn't until she felt Mike's kiss on her neck that she realized he'd withdrawn from her. She turned to kiss him, and released her grip on Gabi's hair. She held him close and whispered her thanks. He mirrored her words, and then whispered that her heart and body belonged to the name she'd cried out. Jade smiled, nodded her head and then turned to embrace her lover, while Mike took his leave.
"I love you," Jade whispered.
"I love you."
"He's not you, though," Jade said, her voice low and quiet as she made her way to a place where she knew her lover needed her.
After I gave my 5* I browsed the comments from your readers.
How nice it was to see that all of them were prepared to be identified (by Lit. standards) and not hide behind the 'Anonymous' blind of those who criticize but are not prepared to back themselves.
'Nuff said. I found that an unexpected theme of great pleasure.
DC,
A tale well told. I've read your work and watched your growth as you tackled stories that stretched you and moved you further up the ladder of success in this craft. This story is worthy of your efforts and is very tastefully told. Thank You. Ronnie W.
What a beautiful erotic Trio ~ Mike, Jade and Gabi turned out to be. It takes a certain unique ability for a Writer to create something so hot~ yet so sensual and tender as this marvelous story. Once I started ~ had to finish it. Wonderful story, Red. Such an enjoyable read.
...how you write so well in all categories Red, another great read