by Drmaxc
I was very reticent about this series at the very begining, but as it developed I have loved it. Sally getting her revenge. It would be so cool to continue this story in some form. But well done an ace story
An attachment has definitely been made between this story and I. Absolutely enjoyed it. Would love to see more character development on the Guard but then not knowing about him does enhance the mystery of him. Keep on writing luv :)
It'd be nice if Jerry found that Katrina was fucking Tom.
First chapter....I didn't think I'd like it. Then the second and third and I was really into it. There was a 1960's novel by John D. McDonald called "The Girl, the Gold Watch and Everything" with a very similar plot line. The watch stopped time. It was one of my all time favorites. The revenge in this story made it more interesting and the sex was outstanding. I liked the way you tied up all the strings making the story end with finality. Many more stories to go.