All Comments on 'An Erotic Grotesque'

what is your intent in writing non-erotic stories put in the wrong catagorie - maybe horror better

if my stories upset and annoy commenters such as you, then i must be doing something right. More, more, more...bring it on!

If you select Mature stories, don't expect all 60+ year old women to be "Toned from working out and looking like a 50 year old" like in most of the Mature stories. I enjoyed the story.

I liked the story because I can see my self as the old lady (I mean when I get that old) but where was the non consent or relutance? They both wanted to do it? I really think you'd get good feedback if maybe you posted this in mature adults. But I liked the story.

Yeah, not bad at all. Cannot understand the last person giving you 0. Wonder if he/she can do any better?

Sexual desire does not always diminish with age and an older woman seeking sex can be very attractive to a younger man.

I was 36,i brought the drink to her table,over 60,too much makeup,dress too short,she handed me coins, to pay,but dropped all but 2 of them.I got down to pick them up,she swivelled in her chair,her pantyhosed legs open to my view,she looked down as i looked,her legs opening wider,as i stood she smiled.When i finished work,i walked over to her table,she stood and said lets go.We drove to her flat,walked in,she dropped her dress,her bra,her saggy breasts dangling.I took my trousers down,she just sat next to me and took my cock in her mouth,she could suck and before long i could feel my cumm rising and i blasted into her mouth,she took the lot.She got up,pulled her pantyhose down and sat across me and lowered her wet pussy down onto my still hard cock and slowly moved up and down.I stayed hard,she kept continually wetting me and then after about half an hour, she slumped forward,i humped up into her until i came for the second time that night.We drifted off to sleep,then woke,moving,she said stay,it was late,i did.I woke,she was moving on top of me,her pussy to my face.It smelled of sex and cumm,i licked and tongued her,she moaned at me until she orgasmed,wetting my face.She stayed like that for awhile but then slid down to my hard cock,sliding her pussy onto it,i humped up into her but she lifted up and moving my cock back,slowly lowered her bum down onto my cock and when i was all the way in her,she sat up and milked my cock with her tight arse. I tried to move up and down but she kept milking me and my cock finally gave in and what cumm i had left went deep into her arse.My cock softened and plopped out of her and i left her,showered and went home.I often saw her at the club,picking up younger guys,my cock hardened knowing what they were in for.

Fuck me , that's hot.

Loved every word and just dreamed as I read the story about amazing sex with mature women. Ladies of great intelligence, dignity, manners, and fond memories they want to remember. You mentioned sagging tits and a smile came across my face. Skin so smooth, warm, touchable, and still very sensitive.

Their passion is still very obvious and even though they don't have the stamina of younger women, their sexuality and desires are still there. There is nothing grotesque here!!!!!

Please write more that are much longer and let us enjoy these wonderful ladies with a broad smile on their face.

A very hot read. Excellent.