All Comments on 'An Evil Trick'

While I do have to agree with "Anon" on one point, there really was no erotica in this submission, I do urge you to go on.

Honestly, the IM chat was a bit distracting in written form. I would have tried to have worked it into a more "story dialogue writing style", but that's just me. :) (I know many people seem to love the "Instant Message stories" over in the Letters & Transcripts category!)

Since this submission is already posted and out there, I suggest starting up a "chapter" series and continue this tale! You left your readers (at least myself, anyway) wanting more. :) You left me curious and unfulfilled... lol

I suggust digging deeper into Chuck's bi/gay desires since it really came as a surprise to the reader (with the exception of category placement of course) by the end!

exactly how does this count as gay male? there's no erotica anywhere!