All Comments on 'An Extra Session'

by Vioan

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P2P2almost 11 years ago
I Love Your Work

This is a story, not smut! Great diction, great plot!

dugaaurudugaauruover 10 years ago
damn

I'm surprised by how much i like this story....it was good, and one of the most unique I've read. And you didn't make it fake either. The main character's initial fear, the situation pushing them into prostitution, they way sex with Joe is described....adds realism to a fantasy world....if that makes sense....

Anyway, this is a new favorite.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
info about nekos

First they are NOT nekomimi they are Nekonians.

Second,Nekos are humanoid felines,which means they are cats shaped like humans

Third,good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Collusion

Something about the way Lily took to being a whore so quickly now as opposed to before makes me feel like there was some sort of collusion between Lily and Joe to force them into this situation. It all makes the plot of this story seem kind of shady to me. Other then that the story was well composed and your style of writing is pleasant.

-Housegoth

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